Full Moon

a full moon – the only orange in the tree - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Contest: Monoku4-Colours Hosted by Silent One placed 1st © 3rd January 2018

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Angela Crabtree

Date: 1/26/2021 2:26:00 PM

A beautiful sight :)

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 3/31/2018 5:35:00 AM

Back again. My step daughter is called 'Saffron Moon', because she was born when that yellow-orange moon shone so bright...

Paul Callus
Date: 3/31/2018 7:07:00 AM

Thank you, Kai. Love the name of your step-daughter...Saffron Moon is also a hibiscus plant which produces beautiful flowers! ~ Regards // paul

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 3/31/2018 5:34:00 AM

That is wow. And not a moon illusion, because you can see it. Kai

Hija De La Luna

Date: 2/14/2018 3:53:00 AM

love orange-colored moon! it is so full ..of many things!

Paul Callus
Date: 2/14/2018 6:44:00 AM

Hi Maria! Thank you...a pleasure to have the Child of the Moon paying me a visit:) Your absence had not gone unnoticed. Hope you're keeping well. Regards // paul

Chris Hagy

Date: 1/20/2018 9:31:00 PM

I really like this Paul :)... I love it when the moon is that color :)

Paul Callus
Date: 1/21/2018 11:27:00 AM

Thank you, Chris; pleased that you enjoyed:) Hope you've been having a lovely weekend:) Regards // paul

Md Johnson

Date: 1/11/2018 10:57:00 AM

Beautiful visual image. Congratulations.

Paul Callus
Date: 1/15/2018 3:25:00 PM

Thank you MD, and pls excuse the late reply. Regards // paul

Maria Williams

Date: 1/7/2018 3:47:00 AM

Oh this is another Gem - All the best for the contest - Your monoku is certainly so imaginative and different bringing the elements together - I must FAVE this...Maria

Paul Callus
Date: 1/7/2018 8:24:00 AM

Thank you for your lovely reaction, Maria! Hope you're having a lovely weekend:) Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/5/2018 8:46:00 PM

wow, now THIS is monoku!!!! Congrats, Paul. Love this.

Paul Callus
Date: 1/6/2018 10:11:00 AM

Your wow and stressed comment are much appreciated, Andrea...Thank you!! Regards // paul

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/5/2018 2:55:00 PM

I knew I would see this one on the list Paul. I think it is excellent! Congratulations! : )

Paul Callus
Date: 1/5/2018 3:01:00 PM

Thank you, Connie. Always a pleasure to have you stopping by, my friend. Regards // paul

Lu Loo

Date: 1/5/2018 12:37:00 PM

oh love this Paul! congrats :)-luloo

Paul Callus
Date: 1/5/2018 12:59:00 PM

Thank you, Laura; yours was a very worthy winner, too:) Warm regards // paul

Sandra Haight

Date: 1/5/2018 9:14:00 AM

Such a wonderful visual, Paul! Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Sandra

Paul Callus
Date: 1/5/2018 12:57:00 PM

So pleased that you like it, Sandra; thank you. Regards // paul

Probir Gupta

Date: 1/5/2018 3:43:00 AM

This is simply outstanding Paul ... Moony congratulations on your top win ...

Paul Callus
Date: 1/5/2018 6:49:00 AM

Thank you, Probir; your generosity is appreciated. Best regards // paul

Riley Hood

Date: 1/4/2018 11:16:00 PM

Wonderful write!

Paul Callus
Date: 1/5/2018 6:51:00 AM

Thank you, Riley! Regards // paul

Eve Roper

Date: 1/4/2018 11:04:00 PM

Excellent write, Paul, congratulations on your win hugs Eve

Paul Callus
Date: 1/5/2018 6:41:00 AM

Many thanks, Eve. Have a lovely weekend. Hugs // paul

Susan Ashley

Date: 1/4/2018 10:27:00 PM

Returning with congratulations, Paul for your excellent win with your amazing write. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Paul Callus
Date: 1/5/2018 6:39:00 AM

Thank you, Susan. Nice of you to make a return journey:) Have a nice day! ~ Warm regards // paul

Laura Leiser

Date: 1/4/2018 3:33:00 PM

Unique and creative observation, Paul! Congrats on your win :)

Paul Callus
Date: 1/5/2018 6:36:00 AM

Thank you, laura:) Belated wishes for a happy new year. Regards // paul

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/4/2018 2:35:00 PM

ohh, what a winner, paul.. sweet congrats!

Paul Callus
Date: 1/4/2018 2:46:00 PM

Thank you, Nette. You did extremely well yourself! Hugs // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/4/2018 12:17:00 PM

- Hi Paul, congratulations on your winning line :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus
Date: 1/4/2018 12:54:00 PM

Thank you, Anne-Lise; enjoyed your winning entry, too:) Hugs // paul

Joseph May

Date: 1/4/2018 11:29:00 AM

Only the eye can pick that one!...Congrats on your win Paul

Paul Callus
Date: 1/4/2018 12:55:00 PM

Thank you for commenting and the congrats, Joseph. All the best // paul

Charlie Smith

Date: 1/4/2018 11:29:00 AM

Well done Paul, a real unique take, congratulations...

Paul Callus
Date: 1/4/2018 12:56:00 PM

Glad you enjoyed it, Charlie; thank you. Regards // paul

Line Gauthier

Date: 1/4/2018 11:04:00 AM

Delightful surprise. The win not a surprise at all. Congrats, Paul.

Paul Callus
Date: 1/4/2018 12:57:00 PM

Enjoyed your delightful visit and congrats, Line; thank you! Regards // paul

Abdul Malik

Date: 1/4/2018 10:00:00 AM

I like to pluck that only orange left on the tree! lol

Paul Callus
Date: 1/4/2018 10:29:00 AM

Thank you, Abdul...you are welcome to partake of this offering. Regards // paul

Sneha Rv

Date: 1/4/2018 8:11:00 AM

Wow what a sight - so beautiful how you wrote this :) Congrats on your super win!

Paul Callus
Date: 1/4/2018 8:34:00 AM

I love your 'wow' Sneha:) Thank you for stopping by with congrats and lovely comments. Best regards // paul

Silent One

Date: 1/4/2018 7:54:00 AM

I thought it was made from cheese? Great one liner Paul... Congratulations on your first place in the colours monoku contest

Paul Callus
Date: 1/4/2018 8:21:00 AM

Many thanks, S-1. Did not expect a first place, but will happily take it:) Regards // paul

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/4/2018 7:18:00 AM

Oh this is a perfect Monoku Paul. Basho like in its beauty! I hope to see this gem at the top of the list! : )

Paul Callus
Date: 1/4/2018 7:43:00 AM

You are kind and generous, dear Connie! I would be happy to be just a speck of Basho's shadow:) ~ Best regards // paul