Full Moon

I went to the doctor one day in June I just wanted to keep my heart in tune He had me take off my clothes Then told me to touch my toes And then he caused me to howl at the moon

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Doris Culverhouse

Date: 6/19/2010 7:58:00 PM

funny...you must have stick legs like my husband...LOL--sorry couldn't resist!

Ralph Taylor

Date: 6/19/2010 6:55:00 PM

Hey, Larry. Happy Fathers Day. Enjoy, my friend. .....Ralph

Jeralynn Clark

Date: 6/19/2010 6:27:00 PM

Cute!!! Made me smile! Jeralynn

Ralph Taylor

Date: 6/19/2010 3:50:00 PM

LOL Been there done that. Great write. ...Ralph

Royal Trevino

Date: 6/19/2010 10:37:00 AM

Great write, what a funny site and such a fit tittle to go along lol =(^.^)=Royal

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/19/2010 8:48:00 AM

LOL, what a mind bend-er this is, way to go mr. Belt,..p.d.

Amy Green

Date: 6/19/2010 8:44:00 AM

HAHAHAHAHA! Liked that doctor did ya, Larry? LOL

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/19/2010 6:30:00 AM

Ha Ha Ha Larry I sure got a visual on this one funny Limerick.. thankxxx for making the "Sweetheart" laugh out loud on an early Saturday morning.. with luv.. "Sweetheart"

Sharon Tideswell

Date: 6/19/2010 6:28:00 AM

This one made me howl with laughter Larry, I think I'd be finding myself another doctor. Really funny ~ Sharon :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/19/2010 6:25:00 AM

A wonderful Limeric - quite humorous

Juan Paolo Galua

Date: 6/19/2010 6:18:00 AM

I love the wit that you show here in this poem...great write...thanks for sharing,,,by the way i have to read other poets...if you like me to read a poem of yours, don't hesitate to give a message...it will always be my pleasure...thanks...^_^ v