Full Bloom

It felt like summer

The birds were singing

Bees were buzzing

The roses were in full bloom

He lay dead

The aroma of freshly baked cakes filled the room

The steak knife had broken going through his chest

He would have a guarantee for that knife, she thought

Him being so efficient

She decided he should be in bed

But the blanket looked silly sitting on top of the knife

A nice hole in the blanket sorted that

Then she realised she could have just put him on his side

I could have put you on your side, darling

He didn’t answer

That was another one of her pet hates, being ignored

I suppose I’ll be making dinner then

You’ll be wanting your steak well done

A bit like yourself

Well done

It felt like summer

The birds were singing

Bees were buzzing

The roses were in full bloom

He lay six foot under them.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Anaya Avatar
February 3, 2024 at 2:04 PM
Wow, compelling and twisty ending. Congratulations on your win Paul!
Bell Avatar
February 4, 2024 at 3:27 AM
She was an interesting woman. lol
Rodrigues Avatar
March 6, 2023 at 10:58 AM
Interesting write! I enjoyed the read.
Bell Avatar
March 7, 2023 at 2:11 AM
She's a happy woman now.
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