Fulcrum of a Rose

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For the Fulcrum of a Rose Poetry Contest of Unseeking Seeker

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Line of inquiry: track where lies the fulcrum of the fragrance of a rose, then likewise find within, your soul. By Unseeking Seeker From whence comes the fragrance of a flower? At its fulcrum, the floral organs attach to the stalk, which has poked up out of the earth to sprout the beautiful petals - that sweet-scented face which I adore in the form of the rose. My soul is like the rose. I am planted on this earth, but I need proper nourishment to fulfill my roles. Heaven, please let your sun reign down on me. My soul, like that of a rose, provides no sweet fragrance without enlightenment.

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Date: 6/25/2025 1:16:00 PM
Congratulations on your winner in this one shaped like a fulcrum or hourglass. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara K
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Date: 6/24/2025 11:27:00 PM
Well congratulations on your winner Andrea I did try.' But perhaps the ground Was too dry.? I shall have to use more water I reckon.? All blessings.'
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Date: 6/24/2025 11:27:00 PM
Well congratulations on your winner Andrea I did try.' But perhaps the ground Was too dry.? I shall have to use more water I reckon.? All blessings.'
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Date: 6/24/2025 8:32:00 AM
Love that last line of your piece here. . . the fragrance of a rose goes far beyond the mere nose to enlighten, to fulfill one's very essence. Congrats for a fine piece deserving of a placement in Unseeking's contest.
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Date: 6/24/2025 1:59:00 AM
lovely! A bit of botany and a lot of spirituality! Congrats on your win!
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Date: 6/23/2025 3:22:00 PM
Truly beautiful, Andrea, I am thrilled it placed so high, deservingly so. CayCay
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Date: 6/23/2025 1:30:00 PM
Back with Congrats on a worthy win!
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Date: 6/23/2025 11:28:00 AM
Heartiest congratulations dear poetess on your win in this contest with a deep poem likening your soul to a rose planted on earth that needs nourishment and enlightenment to emit its perfume. So much like a rose. Wishing you a rosy day.
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Date: 6/23/2025 10:33:00 AM
I love Etheree - you have inspired me with this beautiful poem, Andrea. The word "reign" was rather a touch of inspiration: To evoke imagery of the sun ruling over or dominating the moment with warmth and light. Best wishes in the contest.
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Date: 6/22/2025 5:35:00 PM
Very deep and it glows -
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Date: 6/22/2025 1:55:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your "Fulcrum of a Rose" Etheree write. "Good Luck" Have a wonderful day writing away.......
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Date: 6/22/2025 10:43:00 AM
So interesting today I heard an example..if we find a foot in a parking lot we would know it had been attached to a body, and we would also want to search for the body. Even the foot of the whole is wanted and needed..The body does better with the foot. Great write, Lady!
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Date: 6/22/2025 10:02:00 AM
Nice poem.Short and metaphoric.
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Date: 6/22/2025 6:26:00 AM
Well-done, Andrea. Good use of metaphor. I also like the shape of this concrete poem.
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Date: 6/22/2025 5:19:00 AM
Great! A favorite!
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Date: 6/22/2025 2:35:00 AM
Wow this is beautiful! A beautiful summary of exactly what the prompt depicts! So spiritual and poetic and flows just seamlessly! A fave for me! P.s. CHECK soupmail! Best wishes for the contest Sending you light
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