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Fujiwhara Effect

FUJIWHARA EFFECT Castanets blazing Crashing Dancing, two too, hot Figures frenzied Territorial Spinning, sidewinding Like sumo wrestlers, sizing Each other up A man, a woman Feisty, fiesta of sorts Contemplating their next moves Slowing down, steeping Stepping ever so slightly Looking for a crown Together at last, An immense storm The shore longs to run, to hide Heartbeat of waves, throbbing Frenzied, frightened Castanets chattering Like teeth, casting crowns Against the beach Taking it by force Sand in the eyes The tide rises, higher And higher Into vacation homes Whipping, lashing Every last inch Driving it home A giant craps When the vows are taken In fujiwhara effect 9/18/2017

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Date: 9/18/2017 10:30:00 AM
A hell of a tango! Fantastic write Kim, the image ignites!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/18/2017 11:36:00 AM
Thanks so much, Maureen!
Date: 9/18/2017 10:24:00 AM
I hear the rhythm as I read the poem--written with your unique lovely design--fun to read--well done Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/18/2017 11:36:00 AM
Thanks, Vijay!
Date: 9/18/2017 8:25:00 AM
I am in awe of your incredible write my friend! This is a fabulous poem here Kim! I surely loved reading this amazing piece this morning! What a culminating poem, Great Work!!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/18/2017 11:37:00 AM
Thanks so much, Russell!

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