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Fuchsia Muse

Fuchsia fairy flying fast
Muse improve my poetry
Inspiring windows of past
Visions provisions owed to me
Cure me of this crime of rhyme
Turn it off with a waving wand
Fill me like a cup of red wine
With words that read like a psalm

Copyright © Karen Jones | Year Posted 2025

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Valsa George Date: 2/2/2025 9:19:00 PM "Fill me like a cup of red wine With words that read like a psalm" What a sweet and earnest plea to God! I must say that your prayer is already answered. Let your Muse be always with you....! Wish you a happy and brighter beginning as a poet at the start of the New Year, dear friend. Login to Reply Karen Jones Date: 2/2/2025 9:58:00 PM Thank you sweet poet and May your new year be blessed as well as prosperous.

Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 2/2/2025 6:45:00 PM A charming, witty poem, of very pleasing imagery and rhyme. It is in my faves. :) Login to Reply Karen Jones Date: 2/2/2025 7:21:00 PM I am honored Evelyn! Thank you!

David Crandall Date: 2/2/2025 3:14:00 PM masterfully worded. If you find the cure to the crime of rhyme, let me know! Login to Reply Karen Jones Date: 2/2/2025 3:17:00 PM Hugs lol! I sure will David and thanks for the compliment!

John Read Date: 1/30/2025 7:06:00 AM Hi Karen, your words certainly read like a psalm. xx Login to Reply Karen Jones Date: 1/30/2025 7:29:00 AM What a high compliment! Wow thank you John!

David Fisher Date: 1/29/2025 5:47:00 AM Love the last four lines, Karen, that I can read over and over! They gel so well, and work separately as well. Very enjoyable over all, indeed. Login to Reply Karen Jones Date: 1/29/2025 5:55:00 AM Thanks for reading David!

Daniel Henry Rodgers Date: 1/29/2025 4:30:00 AM Dear Karen, As I was reading I thought how your words feel like a soulful dance, blending light and longing into something timeless. The depth and honesty here are so refreshing. A Beautiful Write! Winter Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel Login to Reply Karen Jones Date: 1/29/2025 5:10:00 AM You are kind Daniel! Thanks and blessings returned

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/29/2025 2:11:00 AM - A waving wand...would like to have one myself, Karen - hugs Login to Reply Karen Jones Date: 1/29/2025 5:09:00 AM Hugs Anne-Lise

Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/28/2025 9:44:00 AM ahh..I can see your Fuschia Fairy on the move! Login to Reply Karen Jones Date: 1/28/2025 10:02:00 AM Yes but my free style form hasn’t improved lol!

Eve Roper Date: 1/28/2025 8:48:00 AM Your work is always so good. I do have problems rhyming. I love poems with fairies. Many blessings to you Login to Reply Karen Jones Date: 1/28/2025 9:00:00 AM Really Eve? I’m honored you think so! Thank you. I struggle when I don’t rhyme.

Kathleen Hassall Date: 1/28/2025 3:49:00 AM This is AWESOME! I love your ability to rhyme. Login to Reply Karen Jones Date: 1/28/2025 4:10:00 AM Really? Gee thanks! I fear it to be monotonous and predictable!

Oliver Mckeithan Date: 1/28/2025 3:48:00 AM Nice read Karen. Hope you dont cured of the curse of rhyme:) Login to Reply Karen Jones Date: 1/28/2025 4:12:00 AM I try to cure myself by doing freewrite style but feel I am just not good at NOT rhyming! lol Thanks!

Mahtab Bangalee Date: 1/28/2025 2:14:00 AM great to read like the filling up red wine Login to Reply Karen Jones Date: 1/28/2025 4:14:00 AM Thanks for reading my poetry Mahtab!

thriveni c mysore Date: 1/28/2025 1:05:00 AM 'crime of rhyme' geez dear friend it is a blessing to rhyme. lookatme, my rhymes don't chime! Login to Reply Karen Jones Date: 1/28/2025 4:13:00 AM Your rhymes are diverse and when you want to you do certainly rhyme! Lol