Fruits

Your kisses are black blueberries, Delicious sparkling rounds, Your kisses are intense strawberries, Red and sweet, white honey, Your lips are peaches, Violets and rare temptations, Apricots full of distant dreams, Your kisses are gooseberries What are the young sacripants Red and sweet blooms, Fruits offered and defended, Fruits that we eat with our eyes, Blueberries with miraculous juice, Sparkling grapes, yellow peaches That only the night can steal, But my heart know them so much.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/15/2023 1:09:00 AM

I see you are a lover of fruits of all kind. Makes for some wonderful images.

Yann Rolland
Date: 10/15/2023 6:14:00 PM

thanks a lot Andrea, for the kind words, fruits are good for health, and are "tasty" have a good week

Emma Goodridge-Hobson

Date: 8/17/2023 10:55:00 PM

I like this. Some beautiful images. Really tasting and smelling the sweetness. Thank you for the beauty.

Yann Rolland
Date: 10/15/2023 6:11:00 PM

thank you Emma

Christina Bowring

Date: 8/17/2023 3:22:00 PM

This is a great poem Yan. Very clever writing. Enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing

Yann Rolland
Date: 10/15/2023 6:11:00 PM

thanks Christina for the kind message

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/16/2023 8:19:00 PM

Delicious fruit and kisses!

Yann Rolland
Date: 10/15/2023 6:10:00 PM

thanks kim, i love fruits

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 8/16/2023 12:06:00 AM

Tasty kisses you describe here Yann, each one flavor to the heart :)

Yann Rolland
Date: 8/16/2023 1:53:00 PM

Thanks a lot Rose, i love your word, "tasty"

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 8/15/2023 5:55:00 PM

I will never look at fruit the same again. Thanks for giving us such a sweet treat.

Yann Rolland
Date: 8/15/2023 6:07:00 PM

Thanks a lot Jerry, for the supportive nad nice comment have a nice day

Yann Rolland

Date: 8/15/2023 5:50:00 PM

Thanks a lot Anne Lise, for the suportive and nice comment

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/15/2023 8:03:00 AM

- Fruitful romance, Yann :) - Lovely poem :) - hugs

Yann Rolland
Date: 8/15/2023 5:50:00 PM

Thanks a lot Anne Lise, for the suportive and nice comment

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/15/2023 1:45:00 AM

What a romantic work you have written in this one. Fruits and berries are tantalizing to most people of the world so is romance. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara

Yann Rolland
Date: 8/15/2023 5:51:00 PM

Thanks Sara, enjoyed your comment, and reading