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Fruit On Table

buttocks and heels bare, tea warm steam rises, lips sip high heel shoes half-grip tea-spout erect, feminine flowers knees slightly apart, supple cerulean striped walls, like a cell cozy boudoir, ample peach-vanilla curve to her back. fruit on table french roses kiss cushion where she relaxes, sunlight spills 11/24/2019

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Date: 11/26/2019 7:10:00 PM
This is awesome, Kim, and daring (if not risqué) on your part to open a poem about fruit with "buttocks and heels bare"!!! Yikes! You have an imagination leagues ahead of mine, dear lady! At my age I'm grateful to even have one. Many thanks for your kind comments. / M
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/26/2019 8:45:00 PM
Thanks so much, Maurice! <3 Kim
Date: 11/25/2019 9:33:00 PM
Never envisioned fruit could be this erotic. Holy Smokes, Kim. You painted a steamy one here! But with superior brushstrokes!! Smiles, Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/25/2019 9:39:00 PM
Thanks, Gershon :)
Date: 11/25/2019 11:41:00 AM
Double WOW from me!!! Very alluring my friend.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/25/2019 1:32:00 PM
Thank you, Chris!
Date: 11/25/2019 8:50:00 AM
WOW! <3 ...a fave x
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/25/2019 1:32:00 PM
Thank you, Maureen! xx

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