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Fruit of the Pen

My underwear is Fruit of the Loom You're welcome for that mental sight Anyway, I thought that seemed poetic To me then, fruit of the pen seems right What fruit juice then, spurts from my pen You might just hesitate to think Juice that could be sweet or downbeat That flies but then falls in the sink But whether my dribble is a scribble Or a comparative master piece Most of the time I find a rhyme And wonder if wonders never cease!

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Date: 11/15/2017 9:23:00 AM
GOTD!
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Pat Adams
Date: 11/15/2017 3:56:00 PM
Thank you much kind sir!!................80)
Date: 11/14/2017 7:27:00 PM
Your a poet and you didn't even know it! You have the poetic flair ~even when writing about your fruit of the loom underwear!~Che :)
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Pat Adams
Date: 11/15/2017 7:23:00 AM
Ha! You clever thing you........;0)......Pat
Date: 11/14/2017 5:39:00 PM
keep the juice spurting and get some depends to catch any unwanted dribbles if necessary lol:-) great humour Pat!:-) hugs jan xx
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Pat Adams
Date: 11/15/2017 7:22:00 AM
Hey, Hey.....I hardly ever dribble (That you know of).....80)
Date: 11/14/2017 5:20:00 PM
I'm just glad it's juice from your pen and not your Fruit of the Loom!
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Pat Adams
Date: 11/15/2017 7:21:00 AM
Ha! You guys must be eating razor soup cuz you sure are sharp!!.............80)
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Jan Allison
Date: 11/14/2017 5:34:00 PM
ha ha ha or even worse a dribble from his banana lol:-) hugs jan xx

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