Pat Adams Poet Quatrain

Fruit of the Pen

My underwear is Fruit of the Loom
You're welcome for that mental sight
Anyway, I thought that seemed poetic
To me then, fruit of the pen seems right

What fruit juice then, spurts from my pen
You might just hesitate to think
Juice that could be sweet or downbeat
That flies but then falls in the sink

But whether my dribble is a scribble
Or a comparative master piece
Most of the time I find a rhyme
And wonder if wonders never cease!

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Lim'Rik Flats November 15, 2017 at 9:23 AM GOTD! Pat Adams November 15, 2017 at 3:56 PM Thank you much kind sir!!................80)

Cheryl Hoffman November 14, 2017 at 7:27 PM Your a poet and you didn't even know it! You have the poetic flair ~even when writing about your fruit of the loom underwear!~Che :) Pat Adams November 15, 2017 at 7:23 AM Ha! You clever thing you........;0)......Pat

Jan Allison November 14, 2017 at 5:39 PM keep the juice spurting and get some depends to catch any unwanted dribbles if necessary lol:-) great humour Pat!:-) hugs jan xx Pat Adams November 15, 2017 at 7:22 AM Hey, Hey.....I hardly ever dribble (That you know of).....80)

Dale Gregory Cozart November 14, 2017 at 5:20 PM I'm just glad it's juice from your pen and not your Fruit of the Loom! Pat Adams November 15, 2017 at 7:21 AM Ha! You guys must be eating razor soup cuz you sure are sharp!!.............80) Jan Allison November 14, 2017 at 5:34 PM ha ha ha or even worse a dribble from his banana lol:-) hugs jan xx