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Frozen Wonderland

Frozen world outside. Underneath life trickles on. Asleep until spring.

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Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 3/15/2010 9:24:00 AM

Compact and concise. That is what a Haiku should and is a la Ars Poetica. You have done that here. Good job. Regards, Gerard.

Colleen Bono

Date: 3/9/2010 8:13:00 PM

Short and sweet.I like this type of poetry but I can't do it yet.I will work on different forms.

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 3/7/2010 12:00:00 PM

Congratulations Marty, on your placement in Raul’s “Icy Cascade” haiku contest. I can see why you are in the winners’ circle! Nice! (Isn't spring here yet?) Smiles, Dane Ann

Thomas Kurdyla

Date: 3/4/2010 9:59:00 AM

Marty, nice job and congrats! This is a very lovely Haiku. Tom

John Freeman

Date: 3/4/2010 9:42:00 AM

Congratulations on #2 Marty. Agape, Moses

Linda Witt-King

Date: 3/3/2010 11:13:00 PM

Ah yes, the mystery of life in the underbelly of the ice. Nice work Marty. Congratulations on your win.

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 3/3/2010 9:31:00 PM

So very nice Haiku, Marty! Congrats on your win! Best wishes, Caroline.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/3/2010 7:27:00 PM

NIcely done, Marty. congratulations for this big win!!

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 3/3/2010 5:02:00 PM

Love it Marty. Congratulations on your great win!

Audrey Haick

Date: 3/3/2010 12:15:00 PM

Congratulations on your wonderful 2nd Place win, Marty!!! Thanks also for your kind comments on my poem! Peace, Audrey

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/3/2010 11:50:00 AM

Marty, I am so glad to see your haiku in the winner's circle. Congratulations. Blessings, Connie

James Fraser

Date: 3/3/2010 11:23:00 AM

Excellent Haiku Marty, deserved of second place >> James

Joyce Johnson

Date: 3/3/2010 8:46:00 AM

You captured the picture beautifully. congratulations. Love, Joyce

Deirdre Omaidin

Date: 3/3/2010 6:17:00 AM

Lovely piece of writing. Congrats. on 2nd place Déirdre

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/3/2010 5:24:00 AM

A big congrats my friend Marty on your second place win in Raul's contest.. such lovely words to your frozen wonderland and a wonderful victory..enjoy..luv.."Sweetheart"

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/3/2010 3:11:00 AM

Congratulations Marty for your second place win in Raul's Icy Cascade contest. Love, Carol

Noel Villarosa

Date: 3/3/2010 3:03:00 AM

This captured all the inspiring spot. Congratulations to you as a 2nd placer to this contest. (^_^) Noel

Raul Moreno

Date: 3/3/2010 1:31:00 AM

Marty, congratulations on winning second place in my contest...Raul

Ray Dillard

Date: 2/27/2010 10:47:00 AM

Very good! I like it! RAY

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/24/2010 4:09:00 PM

Perfect description of the photo Marty.. icy indeed.. appreciate your comments on my blog today.. getting to know each poet on a personal level building friendships... thankxxx..good luck in the new contest if this is your entry.. luv.. "Sweetheart"

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/23/2010 9:27:00 PM

Yes, that is exactly what is happening!! Good one, Marty!! Luv ya, Andrea

Skat A

Date: 2/23/2010 7:43:00 PM

I wish I was a bear this very momment. Hibernating in all this cold weather. ENJOYING your haiku. irma