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Frozen Wonderland

Frozen world outside.
Underneath life trickles on.
Asleep until spring.

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Gerard Keogh Jr.

March 15, 2010 at 9:24 AM

Compact and concise. That is what a Haiku should and is a la Ars Poetica. You have done that here. Good job. Regards, Gerard.

Colleen Bono

March 9, 2010 at 8:13 PM

Short and sweet.I like this type of poetry but I can't do it yet.I will work on different forms.

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

March 7, 2010 at 12:00 PM

Congratulations Marty, on your placement in Raul’s “Icy Cascade” haiku contest. I can see why you are in the winners’ circle! Nice! (Isn't spring here yet?) Smiles, Dane Ann

Thomas Kurdyla

March 4, 2010 at 9:59 AM

Marty, nice job and congrats! This is a very lovely Haiku. Tom

John Freeman

March 4, 2010 at 9:42 AM

Congratulations on #2 Marty. Agape, Moses

Linda Witt-King

March 3, 2010 at 11:13 PM

Ah yes, the mystery of life in the underbelly of the ice. Nice work Marty. Congratulations on your win.

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

March 3, 2010 at 9:31 PM

So very nice Haiku, Marty! Congrats on your win! Best wishes, Caroline.

Andrea Dietrich

March 3, 2010 at 7:27 PM

NIcely done, Marty. congratulations for this big win!!

Robert A. Dufresne

March 3, 2010 at 5:02 PM

Love it Marty. Congratulations on your great win!

Audrey Haick

March 3, 2010 at 12:15 PM

Congratulations on your wonderful 2nd Place win, Marty!!! Thanks also for your kind comments on my poem! Peace, Audrey

Connie Marcum Wong

March 3, 2010 at 11:50 AM

Marty, I am so glad to see your haiku in the winner's circle. Congratulations. Blessings, Connie

James Fraser

March 3, 2010 at 11:23 AM

Excellent Haiku Marty, deserved of second place >> James

Joyce Johnson

March 3, 2010 at 8:46 AM

You captured the picture beautifully. congratulations. Love, Joyce

Deirdre Omaidin

March 3, 2010 at 6:17 AM

Lovely piece of writing. Congrats. on 2nd place Déirdre

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

March 3, 2010 at 5:24 AM

A big congrats my friend Marty on your second place win in Raul's contest.. such lovely words to your frozen wonderland and a wonderful victory..enjoy..luv.."Sweetheart"

Carol Sunshine Brown

March 3, 2010 at 3:11 AM

Congratulations Marty for your second place win in Raul's Icy Cascade contest. Love, Carol

Noel Villarosa

March 3, 2010 at 3:03 AM

This captured all the inspiring spot. Congratulations to you as a 2nd placer to this contest. (^_^) Noel

Raul Moreno

March 3, 2010 at 1:31 AM

Marty, congratulations on winning second place in my contest...Raul

Ray Dillard

February 27, 2010 at 10:47 AM

Very good! I like it! RAY

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

February 24, 2010 at 4:09 PM

Perfect description of the photo Marty.. icy indeed.. appreciate your comments on my blog today.. getting to know each poet on a personal level building friendships... thankxxx..good luck in the new contest if this is your entry.. luv.. "Sweetheart"