Frozen Splendor

The hill stands still, stiff
In stalactite splendor freeze
Just to hear the stream.

By CarolineCecile
Copyright Feb. 25, 2010.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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May 18, 2010 at 8:07 PM
Nice... enjoyed this one a lot.
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March 7, 2010 at 12:16 PM
Congratulations Caroline, on your placement in Raul’s “Icy Cascade” haiku contest. I can see why you are in the winners’ circle! "...stalactite splendor freeze..." Nice! Smiles, Dane Ann
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March 4, 2010 at 1:53 PM
"just to hear the stream" that is such a great ending on this one. Congrats for placing, Caroline. LUv, Andrea
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March 4, 2010 at 10:07 AM
A nice Honor mentioned Caroline. Congratulations, Agape, Moses
Owens Avatar
March 4, 2010 at 7:50 AM
Beautiful Haiku Caroline...Congratulations on your win...Marty
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March 4, 2010 at 6:57 AM
Winner alright, very unusual and cleverly constructed. Déirdre
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March 3, 2010 at 5:34 PM
All this ...just to hear the stream...Love it Caroline! Great inspiration. Congrats on your placement. imaginative and unique is my take on it
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March 3, 2010 at 12:40 PM
Caroline, Congratulations in being in the winner's circle with this fine haiku. Blessings, Connie
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March 3, 2010 at 12:36 PM
My warm congratulations to you on your win in the contest, dear Caroline!! Enjoy it! Peace, AUdrey
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March 3, 2010 at 11:37 AM
Caroline, many congratulations on your placing in Raul's contest >> James
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March 3, 2010 at 9:05 AM
A lovely Haiku. How does he judge among so many beautiful entries? Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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March 3, 2010 at 6:00 AM
Congrats on your HM in Raul's contest.. a wonderful win for a lovely Haiku Caroline and a wonderful win for u to so enjoy..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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March 3, 2010 at 3:35 AM
Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest Icy Cascade Caroline. Love,Carol
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March 3, 2010 at 1:49 AM
Caroline, congratulations on your placement in my contest...Raul
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March 1, 2010 at 6:28 AM
Great descriptive and expressive write that should be in the winner's circle...You have captured it ...much thought had to go into this one. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara
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February 27, 2010 at 8:35 AM
Nice use of alliteration and imagery in this poem. I like the title. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing your poem with us and for your kind words on mine. Have a good weekend. Karen
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February 26, 2010 at 3:13 PM
gives that feeling of being out in the snow really good write here just brings back memories great job
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February 26, 2010 at 8:41 AM
Hey Caroline, You have captured this incredible scenery in your Haiku. These are such fun to write. So many possible ways to observe nature! Thanks for your lovely comments left for me. I really appreciate your friendship. Peace and love, Audrey
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February 26, 2010 at 6:57 AM
I can see it in what you have written in this wonderful Haiku Caroline. Wishing you the very very best in the contest. Love, Carol
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February 25, 2010 at 9:44 PM
Caroline, I think you are someone who held true to the haiku "way" by describing the picture and then giving the added ingsight in the final line. I hope you do well in the contest. Luv, Andrea
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February 25, 2010 at 5:30 PM
let me return the compliment, miss caroline. you have concocted something worthwhile here. I like line 2 a lot! Nicely done. Thanks, Regards, Gerard.
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February 25, 2010 at 4:52 PM
Oh this is purely beautiful writing! Well done!! Love, Carrie
Owens Avatar
February 25, 2010 at 1:16 PM
Caroline...I love your Haiku...Very good description....good luck in the contest...Marty
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February 25, 2010 at 12:40 PM
Wow! Awesome description of the picture. Best wishes for success in the contest, Caroline!
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