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Frozen Splendor

The hill stands still, stiff In stalactite splendor freeze Just to hear the stream. By CarolineCecile Copyright Feb. 25, 2010.

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Amy Green

Date: 5/18/2010 8:07:00 PM

Nice... enjoyed this one a lot.

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 3/7/2010 12:16:00 PM

Congratulations Caroline, on your placement in Raul’s “Icy Cascade” haiku contest. I can see why you are in the winners’ circle! "...stalactite splendor freeze..." Nice! Smiles, Dane Ann

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/4/2010 1:53:00 PM

"just to hear the stream" that is such a great ending on this one. Congrats for placing, Caroline. LUv, Andrea

John Freeman

Date: 3/4/2010 10:07:00 AM

A nice Honor mentioned Caroline. Congratulations, Agape, Moses

Marty Owens

Date: 3/4/2010 7:50:00 AM

Beautiful Haiku Caroline...Congratulations on your win...Marty

Deirdre Omaidin

Date: 3/4/2010 6:57:00 AM

Winner alright, very unusual and cleverly constructed. Déirdre

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 3/3/2010 5:34:00 PM

All this ...just to hear the stream...Love it Caroline! Great inspiration. Congrats on your placement. imaginative and unique is my take on it

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/3/2010 12:40:00 PM

Caroline, Congratulations in being in the winner's circle with this fine haiku. Blessings, Connie

Audrey Haick

Date: 3/3/2010 12:36:00 PM

My warm congratulations to you on your win in the contest, dear Caroline!! Enjoy it! Peace, AUdrey

James Fraser

Date: 3/3/2010 11:37:00 AM

Caroline, many congratulations on your placing in Raul's contest >> James

Joyce Johnson

Date: 3/3/2010 9:05:00 AM

A lovely Haiku. How does he judge among so many beautiful entries? Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/3/2010 6:00:00 AM

Congrats on your HM in Raul's contest.. a wonderful win for a lovely Haiku Caroline and a wonderful win for u to so enjoy..luv.. Linda-Marie..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/3/2010 3:35:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest Icy Cascade Caroline. Love,Carol

Raul Moreno

Date: 3/3/2010 1:49:00 AM

Caroline, congratulations on your placement in my contest...Raul

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/1/2010 6:28:00 AM

Great descriptive and expressive write that should be in the winner's circle...You have captured it ...much thought had to go into this one. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara

Date: 2/27/2010 8:35:00 AM

Nice use of alliteration and imagery in this poem. I like the title. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing your poem with us and for your kind words on mine. Have a good weekend. Karen

John Patrick Robbins Aka Gonzo

Date: 2/26/2010 3:13:00 PM

gives that feeling of being out in the snow really good write here just brings back memories great job

Audrey Haick

Date: 2/26/2010 8:41:00 AM

Hey Caroline, You have captured this incredible scenery in your Haiku. These are such fun to write. So many possible ways to observe nature! Thanks for your lovely comments left for me. I really appreciate your friendship. Peace and love, Audrey

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/26/2010 6:57:00 AM

I can see it in what you have written in this wonderful Haiku Caroline. Wishing you the very very best in the contest. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/25/2010 9:44:00 PM

Caroline, I think you are someone who held true to the haiku "way" by describing the picture and then giving the added ingsight in the final line. I hope you do well in the contest. Luv, Andrea

Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 2/25/2010 5:30:00 PM

let me return the compliment, miss caroline. you have concocted something worthwhile here. I like line 2 a lot! Nicely done. Thanks, Regards, Gerard.

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/25/2010 4:52:00 PM

Oh this is purely beautiful writing! Well done!! Love, Carrie

Marty Owens

Date: 2/25/2010 1:16:00 PM

Caroline...I love your Haiku...Very good description....good luck in the contest...Marty

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/25/2010 12:40:00 PM

Wow! Awesome description of the picture. Best wishes for success in the contest, Caroline!