Frozen Side of the Sun - May 4

She, who had seemed my sun some bygone time,
feels now much icier than even far 
forsaken   pluto’s   sunless hemisphere.
Please! reckless Universe! enable rhyme

to unriddle unreason’s paradigm!
—The frozen side of the sun!—What bizarre
world bears such contradiction? Bringing near
fire and frost? both deform eachother’s frame!

And so: she never was my flame—nor now
my glacial winter—.No, she simply was 
a human hurting, a someone hurting
me.—a cornered creature caught converting 
an inward chatter(,adisconcertingbuzz,)
whichever way her body would allow.
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Hind Avatar
May 5, 2025 at 8:31 PM
This is deep. I really enjoyed reading it. A Fav
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May 6, 2025 at 8:01 PM
Thank you kindly :)
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