Frozen In Time

***for the one who slipped away***


                                      What is true love?
                                Can there be such a thing?
                                         The answer,
                                  My heart is still aching!

                                      I see a glimpse
                                   Every now and then
                                  A moment suspended
                                           In time
                                    A picture once cast
                                           Frozen
                               In the center of my mind
                                      But I was blind
                                         Immature
                                       To true love
                                That was one of a kind

                                   A love so divine!!!


:JLP}......
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Fraser Avatar
September 18, 2009 at 11:13 AM
Been there Jared, and not just once - koolio piece>>James
Freeman Avatar
August 13, 2009 at 11:08 AM
Awesome write Jared, I see a comparson of the divine love, that true, to a love that's not quite so true, sometimes in your write. Sincerely Moses
Heslop Avatar
August 10, 2009 at 3:10 PM
sad story...grrth
Kendrick Avatar
August 10, 2009 at 2:53 PM
Nicely written. Keep writing. Sara
Brown Avatar
August 10, 2009 at 2:47 PM
Oh yes but........maybe it was really never meant to be. Splendid writing Jared. Love, Carol
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