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Frozen In Time

***for the one who slipped away*** What is true love? Can there be such a thing? The answer, My heart is still aching! I see a glimpse Every now and then A moment suspended In time A picture once cast Frozen In the center of my mind But I was blind Immature To true love That was one of a kind A love so divine!!! :JLP}......

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/18/2009 11:13:00 AM
Been there Jared, and not just once - koolio piece>>James
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Date: 8/13/2009 11:08:00 AM
Awesome write Jared, I see a comparson of the divine love, that true, to a love that's not quite so true, sometimes in your write. Sincerely Moses
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Date: 8/10/2009 3:10:00 PM
sad story...grrth
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Date: 8/10/2009 2:53:00 PM
Nicely written. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 8/10/2009 2:47:00 PM
Oh yes but........maybe it was really never meant to be. Splendid writing Jared. Love, Carol
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