Frozen In Time

"A photograph is a moment frozen in time . . ." It is a family gathering in the photograph I have found of me as a baby and my beautiful mother holding me in her arms; frozen in time . . . she gazes down at me, and there is such love in her eyes; her skin is porcelain perfection, frozen in time . . . with cheeks a sweet blush and lips a whisper of roses; her raven hair brushed off her lovely face, and I am in a pink dress with a pink knitted sweater from grandma and pink socks on chubby legs; frozen in time . . . I am porcelain too with cheeks blushed and lips a whisper of roses and raven hair. ________________________________ September 4, 2019
Note: This is a form I have created called "The Photograph" Look at a photograph that is meaningful to you and write about it in 3 verses of 6 lines with one line being a short refrain placed somewhere in each verse and is indented that also becomes your title. A quote is added. The poem can be left aligned or centered. Keep the lines short and medium length. Narrative- Definition A narrative is story-telling, in the form of a poem, where events or accounts are chronicled throughout the tale to the reader, or audience. Poetry/Narrative/Frozen in Time Copyright Protected, ID 19- 1178-834-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Submitted to the contest, Write The Poem You Always Wanted To Write sponsor, Caren Krutsinger First Place
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September 17, 2019 at 11:30 AM
I love the picture you have shared ~ it's a beautiful piece and I feel I can see it clearly. What I love most is the love I hear in your 'voice' as you describe your mother ~ truly precious.
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September 14, 2019 at 1:23 PM
Beautiful poem!!
La France Avatar
September 14, 2019 at 7:29 PM
Thank you
Callus Avatar
September 14, 2019 at 10:58 AM
It's amazing what a photograph can inspire, Constance! Beautiful! No wonder it placed 1st in Caren's contest. ~ Regards // paul
La France Avatar
September 14, 2019 at 7:29 PM
Thanks for the nice comment
Roper Avatar
September 13, 2019 at 10:42 PM
Beautiful, Dear Heart, another great challenge ... Hope you are doing better. Hugs Eve
La France Avatar
September 14, 2019 at 7:30 PM
Eve, thank you for the beautiful, no not feeling that good ~
Dietrich Avatar
September 12, 2019 at 6:58 PM
Constance, you have come up with another very clever and inspiring challenge. How do you always do that? I seldom see judges who can come up with so many great ideas as you do. Thanks for the example, dear. Love the description for yourself as a chld.
La France Avatar
September 14, 2019 at 7:31 PM
Andrea, thank you for the compliment and for the nice comment
May Avatar
September 12, 2019 at 12:31 PM
How can anyone compete with this? It's awesome my friend your new contest now scares me! What a great writer you are!!
La France Avatar
September 14, 2019 at 7:31 PM
Bobby, thank you so much for the compliment
Lawless Avatar
September 12, 2019 at 8:24 AM
Oh my.....this is way to good Constance. I felt as if I were the one snapping the picture.....great write...
La France Avatar
September 14, 2019 at 7:32 PM
John, that is the best compliment
Mcintosh Avatar
September 11, 2019 at 8:56 PM
Lovely. I enjoyed reading and wish you many blessings.
La France Avatar
September 14, 2019 at 7:32 PM
Regina, thank you for the lovely
Hamilton Avatar
September 9, 2019 at 10:36 AM
Great idea Constance, loved the poem, congrats on another top win!
La France Avatar
September 9, 2019 at 2:06 PM
John, thank you for the compliment and the congrats.
Roper Avatar
September 8, 2019 at 7:56 PM
Great write, Constance, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
La France Avatar
September 9, 2019 at 2:07 PM
Eve, thank you so much for the congratulations.
Wolf Avatar
September 8, 2019 at 7:18 PM
Constance, normally 'a picture is worth a thousand words.' But in your case, a little over a hundred words is worth a thousand pictures! Lovely done. Congrats on your win in the contest. Best wishes, Gershon
La France Avatar
September 9, 2019 at 2:08 PM
Gershon, thank you for the great comment and the congratulations.
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 8, 2019 at 4:10 PM
Your poem and form are so charming Constance. I will have to try your invented form. I like the repetition that accentuates the title. This is beautifully composed Constance. Congratulations on having it deservingly awarded with First Placement! : ) xxoo
La France Avatar
September 9, 2019 at 2:10 PM
Connie, thank you for the compliment and congratulations and you will get a chance in my next contest.
Scars Avatar
September 4, 2019 at 8:12 AM
aww how sweet, love the form too. a few words reminded me of my daughter's rosy cheeks :) good luck sweet Ode :)-luloo
La France Avatar
September 4, 2019 at 11:04 AM
Lu, thanks for visiting my poem and for the comment !
Romios Avatar
September 4, 2019 at 4:29 AM
Good poem, I like the idea of using your form. Helpful and creative. Pamagiota
La France Avatar
September 4, 2019 at 7:27 AM
another thought... I chose not to post the photograph as I want the words to speak but the photograph could be displayed with the poem.
La France Avatar
September 4, 2019 at 7:18 AM
Panagiota, thank you so much for visiting my poem, and for the compliment, you should try it with a photograph and let me know what you think, after I wrote this I felt such love for that mother who held her baby (me) and gazed and how beautiful she was and that I truly was a little version of her..
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