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Heraclitus ~ The hidden connection is stronger than the obvious one.

As I watched her dance in the firelight, hypnotised by her every move that night. The intensity of the flames seemed to illuminate her expressions from her lips to her hips. Filled with consternation as she approached and acknowledged my gaze, but fixed was my eyes on her beauty. Something about the night's background infused with flames in my peripheral vision that she seemed to float on air. Either way, I was no longer in the physical realm. Now, my anxiety had turned to utter calmness, it was as though our spirits had met before! Frozen in the moment, I watched, I saw before me a kindred soul. All that existed was this new-founded connection.

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Date: 11/15/2018 11:04:00 PM
A wonderful free verse, my friend.. Such profound words.. Indeed touches the soul.. A masterpiece!! Blessings..
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Date: 10/18/2018 8:37:00 PM
Well rendered my brother...frozen in gold light...love & light...^WW^
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Date: 10/18/2018 12:35:00 AM
I love this and I know.
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Date: 10/17/2018 5:32:00 PM
Beautiful expressions in every word penned W.W. Soul connections are so important in life. Without them where would we be? I believe the soul paves a path to reality, enjoyed every word penned. thank you for sharing.
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Date: 10/16/2018 11:19:00 PM
Leave mere physical connection and live in physical connection with heart and soul /// nice poem
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Date: 10/16/2018 11:04:00 PM
When you find the kindred soul, all you can know at that moment is the new-found connection; nothing else matters. Well done, my friend! Profound and beautifully written.
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Date: 10/16/2018 9:22:00 PM
Me too!!! :)
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Date: 10/16/2018 8:47:00 PM
Wow, I'm watching now too
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