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Frozen In Crytalline-Number 4

The rising sun cradles forest snow.
Moving each shadow to and fro.


contest Frozen in Crystalline-Number 4
11/22/14

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 11/30/2014 7:12:00 PM

I love the image you created, Frederic! One of my favorites...congrats to you! Hugs, Rhonda

Skat A

Date: 11/30/2014 1:51:00 AM

FREDERIC, Congratulations with your awesome "Frozen In Crystalline" win. ~SKAT~

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/30/2014 12:32:00 AM

tender is this melody, Frederick!.. cheers to you for your great win

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 11/29/2014 10:28:00 PM

Wow a wonderful imagery Frederic! Congrats on awesome win !

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 11/29/2014 9:25:00 PM

Excellent! Congratulations on your well deserved win!

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 11/29/2014 12:59:00 PM

great interpretation Fred congrats on win hugs

Jan Allison

Date: 11/29/2014 12:15:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Frederic:-) Hugs Jan xx

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/29/2014 8:45:00 AM

This one makes me smile. Congratulations.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/29/2014 7:07:00 AM

Congrats on your winning entry..There were some very creative works on the list..Such a talented group of writers gathered at this soup pot....Sara

Paul Callus

Date: 11/29/2014 5:34:00 AM

Congratulations on a very merited win, Frederic; the first line hit home straight away! // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/29/2014 12:39:00 AM

frederic, this was truly one of my favorites. for perfection, remove that period after snow and use a comma there! Just loved this one and how you made the sun be a cradle for the shadows. congratulations.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 11/23/2014 3:50:00 AM

Oh this is so wonderful Frederic! Great imagery n write! Gud luck!

Jan Allison

Date: 11/22/2014 1:16:00 PM

beautifully penned Frederic- good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx