John Lawless Poet Crystalline

Frozen In Crystalline - Number 2

Frozen in Crystalline – Number 2


Cold light, held above the vacant bench,
iced tribute to love’s passioned warmth.


11/21/2014

submitted to Frozen in Crystalline – Poetry Contest
sponsor – Andrea Dietrich

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders November 30, 2014 at 3:43 PM A beautiful picture, John, and I love the touch of romance! Congrats to you on an awesome win! Hugs, Rhonda John Lawless December 3, 2014 at 10:44 PM Thanks Rhonda for stopping by to read my entry.

Skat A November 30, 2014 at 1:54 AM JOHN, Congratulations with your awesome "Frozen In Crystalline" win. ~SKAT~ John Lawless November 30, 2014 at 8:58 AM Thanks again for your support.

Nette Onclaud November 30, 2014 at 12:51 AM a fine gem of a piece ,john..cheers to you for your great win John Lawless November 30, 2014 at 8:59 AM Thank you Nette for your continued support.

Sandra Haight November 29, 2014 at 6:21 PM Hi John, such great imagery created with your words that mirror the feeling in the picture. Congratulations on your win! Sandra John Lawless November 30, 2014 at 9:02 AM Sandra, there is a bench similar to that in a nearby park that I visit with my dog on many cold and eerie nights.

Shadow Hamilton November 29, 2014 at 1:16 PM hi John congrats on win hugs

Jan Allison November 29, 2014 at 12:21 PM Dropping back with my congrats John-) Hugs Jan xx John Lawless November 30, 2014 at 9:01 AM Thank you Jan for following my writing and for you support.

Sara Kendrick November 29, 2014 at 7:58 AM Congrats on your winning work..There are some very interesting and descriptive works in the winner's list..A fine group of poets gather at this soup pot..Sara John Lawless November 30, 2014 at 9:01 AM you got that right Sara, dip the soup ladle into the soup and you get an overflowing mix of delicious poetry.

Andrea Dietrich November 29, 2014 at 12:53 AM I sure do love the poems about that park bench. Iced tribute indeed. that picture sure did look cold, didn't it? good one, John. congratulations in my contest. John Lawless November 30, 2014 at 8:57 AM Thanks Andrea for you comment and you dedication to the poetry contests

Reason A. Poteet November 22, 2014 at 5:35 AM Like a toast blessing the warmth of winter. Well-done, John. John Lawless November 30, 2014 at 9:03 AM Thanks for reading and commenting

Brenda Meier-Hans November 21, 2014 at 7:10 PM Very nice John. Good luck in the contest. John Lawless November 30, 2014 at 9:03 AM Thanks Brenda.

Jan Allison November 21, 2014 at 6:32 PM beautiful imagery John:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx