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Frozen Forest

Within a clearing I stand at the Forests dusk. White snow blankets the ground, and the trees so tall They touch the sky. One step after the last , traversing the misty slow Through the frozen forest. But as I move the weather does too. Changing form from soft snow-flakes Into lashing daggers. Vision shrouded by the beating wings of the blizzard. Yet I have to remain calm… still. Breathing slowly, Slower. I can hear it… Ba-dum… Ba-dum… Ba-dum… Cold, so cold, frozen. Yet the coldness of the forest Can never overcome the warmth Of my beating heart.

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Date: 11/11/2024 11:31:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 6/12/2017 1:22:00 AM
I can see you stand, warm, silhoueted against the frozen landscape. Welcome to PoetrySoup
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Raven Blackwood
Date: 6/12/2017 2:22:00 AM
Thank-you :) I really appreciate your comment :)
Date: 6/11/2017 9:52:00 PM
This is really good! I love the imagery! :)
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Raven Blackwood
Date: 6/12/2017 2:23:00 AM
Thank-you :) I really appreciate your comment :)

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