Frozen Fizz of the Icy Lake

Silent forever Blue champagne flash frozen ice Frozen cork unpops To take a drink of nature It's heavenly sculpted art
-- Thoughts on a frozen lake --
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Kendrick Avatar
August 26, 2011 at 10:33 AM
Congrats on your win in Brian's great contest..Sara
Neels Avatar
August 26, 2011 at 7:57 AM
Wow, this is really stunning Tim, just love the imagery.. Congratulations on your win in the contest :) Wilma
Jones Avatar
August 26, 2011 at 2:14 AM
vermont? ... very nice, tim, congrats!
Sweetheart Avatar
August 25, 2011 at 3:19 PM
Congrats Tim on a terrific win in this contest with outstanding poetry luv.. a wonderful write..
Brown Avatar
August 25, 2011 at 2:32 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Brian's "A Jewel In Your Crown" contest Tim. Love, Carol
Onclaud Avatar
August 25, 2011 at 12:31 PM
tim.. so happy you placed real well... engrossing... happy thumbs up to you on your stunning win! :) huggs
B Avatar
July 20, 2011 at 6:43 PM
Thanks James, and well said, couldn't agree with you more about nature and inspiration. I always wanted to model myself as a poet after Robert Frost, hopefully I can somewhat live up to it.
Fraser Avatar
July 20, 2011 at 3:00 PM
Nature sure ignites some of the most wonderful views that give poets and writers so much to write about. Fine Tanka Tim :)
Roberts Avatar
July 12, 2011 at 10:28 AM
beautiful imagery
B Avatar
July 12, 2011 at 6:09 PM
Thank you Francine! I was inspired by a picture Yahoo had up the other day, a frozen lake with all these tiny frozen bubbles under the surface. It was truly beautiful.
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