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Frozen Fizz of the Icy Lake

Silent forever
Blue champagne flash frozen ice
Frozen cork unpops
To take a drink of nature
It's heavenly sculpted art


-- Thoughts on a frozen lake --

Copyright © Tim B | Year Posted 2011

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Sara Kendrick Date: 8/26/2011 10:33:00 AM Congrats on your win in Brian's great contest..Sara Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 8/26/2011 7:57:00 AM Wow, this is really stunning Tim, just love the imagery.. Congratulations on your win in the contest :) Wilma Login to Reply

Nancy Jones Date: 8/26/2011 2:14:00 AM vermont? ... very nice, tim, congrats! Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 8/25/2011 3:19:00 PM Congrats Tim on a terrific win in this contest with outstanding poetry luv.. a wonderful write.. Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 8/25/2011 2:32:00 PM Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Brian's "A Jewel In Your Crown" contest Tim. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 8/25/2011 12:31:00 PM tim.. so happy you placed real well... engrossing... happy thumbs up to you on your stunning win! :) huggs Login to Reply

Tim B Date: 7/20/2011 6:43:00 PM Thanks James, and well said, couldn't agree with you more about nature and inspiration. I always wanted to model myself as a poet after Robert Frost, hopefully I can somewhat live up to it. Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 7/20/2011 3:00:00 PM Nature sure ignites some of the most wonderful views that give poets and writers so much to write about. Fine Tanka Tim :) Login to Reply

Francine Roberts Date: 7/12/2011 10:28:00 AM beautiful imagery Login to Reply Tim B Date: 7/12/2011 6:09:00 PM Thank you Francine! I was inspired by a picture Yahoo had up the other day, a frozen lake with all these tiny frozen bubbles under the surface. It was truly beautiful.