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Frozen Fizz of the Icy Lake

Silent forever Blue champagne flash frozen ice Frozen cork unpops To take a drink of nature It's heavenly sculpted art -- Thoughts on a frozen lake --

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/26/2011 10:33:00 AM

Congrats on your win in Brian's great contest..Sara

Wilma Neels

Date: 8/26/2011 7:57:00 AM

Wow, this is really stunning Tim, just love the imagery.. Congratulations on your win in the contest :) Wilma

Nancy Jones

Date: 8/26/2011 2:14:00 AM

vermont? ... very nice, tim, congrats!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/25/2011 3:19:00 PM

Congrats Tim on a terrific win in this contest with outstanding poetry luv.. a wonderful write..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/25/2011 2:32:00 PM

Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Brian's "A Jewel In Your Crown" contest Tim. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/25/2011 12:31:00 PM

tim.. so happy you placed real well... engrossing... happy thumbs up to you on your stunning win! :) huggs

Tim B

Date: 7/20/2011 6:43:00 PM

Thanks James, and well said, couldn't agree with you more about nature and inspiration. I always wanted to model myself as a poet after Robert Frost, hopefully I can somewhat live up to it.

James Fraser

Date: 7/20/2011 3:00:00 PM

Nature sure ignites some of the most wonderful views that give poets and writers so much to write about. Fine Tanka Tim :)

Francine Roberts

Date: 7/12/2011 10:28:00 AM

beautiful imagery

Tim B
Date: 7/12/2011 6:09:00 PM

Thank you Francine! I was inspired by a picture Yahoo had up the other day, a frozen lake with all these tiny frozen bubbles under the surface. It was truly beautiful.