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May 4, 2026  Frozen Blossom  Sponsor:Edward Ibeh

Frozen Blossom

Frozen Blossom

    Cold lips, sun-kissed.
Rose-crimson comes to life,
   unfolding bliss,
      opening aperture -
  hear the rapture.
The tint of snow, bright-red.
  Frozen sunset
      in ev-e-ry petal.
She shivers, with delight,
                 anticipates
animated brushstrokes
  fondling velvet.
Revival, early Spring -
   sings angel wings,
tinged with silver detox.
        As she breathes out,
she warms inner stamen,
      awakening
   potent place in Eden.
Frozen blossom,
      fragile in dormant state -
   latent shatter,
but she is beautiful,
               and capable
         of weathering the snow.
  A blushing bride
    with wedding veil, of white,
      in April’s hold.
Espoused daren’t let her
        out of his sight.
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Guptar Avatar
May 15, 2026 at 8:51 AM
Heartiest congratulations, dear poetess on sharing the top win in this contest with a very lovely poem with picturesque metaphor, flowing rhythm and a romantic breath. Wishing you a lovely oncoming week-end.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 15, 2026 at 10:03 AM
Thank you kindly, my friend!
Poet Avatar
May 15, 2026 at 6:44 AM
A beautiful ode to a springtime bloom. Strong feelings and excellent progression. I am very happy for you because you secured first place.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 15, 2026 at 10:04 AM
Thank you, my friend!
George Avatar
May 15, 2026 at 5:05 AM
Lovely poem on a flower that anticipates spring. Powerful sentiments and great flow. Congratulations on your first place win.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 15, 2026 at 10:04 AM
Thank you, Valsa!
Alex Avatar
May 14, 2026 at 11:18 PM
A very powerful nature-beauty depiction. Congratulations!
Rodrigues Avatar
May 15, 2026 at 3:36 AM
Thank you, Christuraj!
Ibeh Avatar
May 14, 2026 at 2:29 PM
Wow, this is simply sublime, Kim. Really stunning imagery, I might add. Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 14, 2026 at 2:33 PM
Thank you so much! Fun to write! So excited for the top win. <3
Anaya Avatar
May 14, 2026 at 8:33 AM
imagery fab, this kinda reminds me of a blitz...blizzardy cool display. Big congratulations !
Rodrigues Avatar
May 14, 2026 at 2:34 PM
Thank you, Anaya, and so kindly commenting on many of my poems! Hugs
Leiser Avatar
May 6, 2026 at 4:21 PM
Lush, rich imagery is expressed with your talented pen, Kim! Just beautiful! Enjoyed this! :)
Rodrigues Avatar
May 6, 2026 at 5:52 PM
Thank you, Laura! <3
Buhagiar Avatar
May 6, 2026 at 1:31 AM
The beauty of a rose - a blushing bride - opening its full bloom.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 6, 2026 at 4:08 AM
Thank you, my friend!
Wolf Avatar
May 5, 2026 at 8:19 PM
So lovely, Kim. Inspirational, ecstatic verse.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 6, 2026 at 4:08 AM
Thank you so much xx
Hind Avatar
May 4, 2026 at 3:02 PM
absolutely lovely verse Kim <3
Rodrigues Avatar
May 4, 2026 at 3:24 PM
Thank you, Paige! I knew you would read. Hugs
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