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Edward's This or That Contest Vol. 38 ~ 4/25/26

Frozen Blossom

Our flirtatious glances were as rosebuds in Spring
Infatuation blossomed into confessions of love
LOVE: such a fragile emotion, a rather delicate thing

We bloomed profusely in Summer's fulgent heat
His touch as soft as the velvet of my crimson petals
We swayed in gentle breezes, content and replete

On warm, sun kissed days and long sultry nights
His parted lips tasted far sweeter than raw honey
We savored each moment of exquisite delight

In Elysian fields we lingered by Summer's end
Romance, the nectar of our paradisial passion
But in our arbored garden, I felt him bend

With Autumn approaching, the air grew chill
There was a sense of fading and withering within
A petal fell and my world seemed to stand still

Our bloom lost its luster, its fragrant floral scent
I languished in pathos as my lover turned away 
Feeling the agony of loss, I drooped, head bent 

No longer did I feel the warmth of the sun
Inside my weary veins no tenderness remained
The beginning of my demise had sorrowfully begun

Love became a memory in Winter's frigid mist
Tears spilled like drops of mourning dew
Snowflakes touched my lips, once tenderly kissed

I became a frozen blossom, standing on my own 
Icebound in time ~ once loved, forsaken and alone
My season of life and love was tragically windblown

Pierced by the thorn that once protected my heart,
I have no interest to awaken in the thawing of Spring
for love died and wretched regret has torn me apart
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Alex Avatar
May 14, 2026 at 11:09 PM
"I became a frozen blossom, standing on my own" - though not sentimental this is a very beautiful and powerful metaphor of lament and grief. Congratulations!
Lane Avatar
May 15, 2026 at 6:06 AM
Thanks so very much for your thoughtful comments.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 14, 2026 at 7:01 PM
The 6th verse got me! The drooping of the head… Congrats on your win!
Lane Avatar
May 15, 2026 at 6:06 AM
Thanks for letting me know your favorite lines, Kim. I always appreciate your that.
Ibeh Avatar
May 14, 2026 at 2:11 PM
Such a great poem, Lin. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this one. Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest.
Lane Avatar
May 15, 2026 at 6:05 AM
Many thanks for finding my poem win worthy, Edward.
Jones Avatar
May 14, 2026 at 11:55 AM
Congratulations Lin on your top win!
Lane Avatar
May 15, 2026 at 6:05 AM
Thank you, Karen.
Cunningham Avatar
April 26, 2026 at 10:07 AM
Quite a sad verse , joy turned to sadness as that romance faded and withered then gone forever, the two word title promt really inspired you. Brilliant write Lin, I know this will do well in the contest. Tom
Lane Avatar
April 26, 2026 at 10:46 AM
There are some themes that I cannot resist. Thank you for your encouraging comments, Tom.
Rodgers Avatar
April 26, 2026 at 9:42 AM
Dear Lin, you really took my heart for a walk with this one. The way you carried that love through the season for it felt so real, so lived-in. Your ending hit hard. That image of a blossom frozen in place that is still beautiful, still itself, but hurting… you wrote that with such honesty. Just wanted you to know I felt every line. Beautiful work, my friend. Blessings, Daniel
Lane Avatar
April 26, 2026 at 9:49 AM
Thank you, Daniel. For me to know that you felt my lines is a compliment to be prized. I certainly appreciate your support. Emotional pains from a lost love are never completely healed. They form rings around a heart, scars that never allow the memories to fade.
Edmonds  Avatar
April 26, 2026 at 7:19 AM
Beautiful poetry Lin, a lovely tale of love in bloom, a love that had to end too soon… Beryl
Lane Avatar
April 26, 2026 at 9:29 AM
Thank you so much for sharing the kindness of your thoughts, Beryl.
M  Avatar
April 26, 2026 at 4:47 AM
Queen of the romance and love….lost , found,…l.and all the romance and love in between!! A beautiful poem of lost love Lin! Debx
Lane Avatar
April 26, 2026 at 9:29 AM
A title without a crown... lol This is not a monarchy, so it's best just to be plain ol me. Thanks so much for your supportive comments, sweet sister poet.
Kitchin Avatar
April 25, 2026 at 3:03 PM
Lin, so beautifully penned with emotions of a lost love. I like the transition of the seasons with the transition of the relationship. The finale being winter and the once vibrant rose blossom was left a frozen bloom in winter to die as the relationship did. Best for the contest.
Lane Avatar
April 25, 2026 at 3:48 PM
I’m grateful for your kind compliments on this one, Tania. Thank you very much.
Lawless Avatar
April 25, 2026 at 12:35 PM
I shall read this the freshly budding rose bushes outside and encourage them to rejoice is the hope of Summer's forever season of love and lovers. beautifully written Lin
Lane Avatar
April 25, 2026 at 1:00 PM
You will be as endeared by your budding roses as much as your comments are always endearing to me. Thanks, John.
Pachecho Avatar
April 25, 2026 at 10:50 AM
Lin, all of your swan feathers are in place, elegant and beautiful, flowing in harmony with nature. Nicely penned.
Lane Avatar
April 25, 2026 at 12:07 PM
Swans mate for life. I tried to have this rose relate the same sense of irretrievable loss. Thanks ever so kindly, Connie.
Goldsmith Avatar
April 25, 2026 at 10:33 AM
I enjoyed reading your lovely "Frozen Blossom" write. Great Picture with a Great Ending. I love your line, "LOVE: such a fragile emotion, a rather delicate thing." So Very True. "Good Luck." Have a blessed/wonderful ~ day weekend writing away, Paula..................
Lane Avatar
April 25, 2026 at 12:05 PM
Thank you very much, Paula. It was an interesting place I put myself to write this one. I’m glad you saw value in it.
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