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Frozen

A droplet falls to my lips, quaking in the cold. I feel the world crying now, the sky’s so still, on hold. It’s like our lips, were meant to touch. And your hands, were meant for mine. Trembling in the darkest night, I feel our dreams entwine. So keep me warm, with tender words. Explore my aching mind. Give me your… Elusive touch… Two frozen hearts in time.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/5/2016 10:12:00 PM
Candice Braman, nice to see this one again. linda
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Date: 1/5/2015 5:12:00 AM
- A warm welcome to the P - Soup and into the new year 2015 - I look forward to reading more of your poems this year - I hope you will enjoy reading and writing with us, Candice - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/4/2015 4:45:00 PM
Candice,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) This is a great way to start the New Year. Lucky Us, To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends! @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 1/4/2015 9:51:00 AM
A charming little piece of prose! :) john.
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