Frozen

I look outside and see the snow 
                                   running from the clouds
                              and even though it’s hitting the 
                          pavement at top speed, it lands ever 
                                     so gently and silently.
                               This phenomenon amazes me
                         every time it snows, which by the way
                      may or may not be very often where I live
                               but it does happen every year.

                           It really is quite beautiful to look at
                       when it covers everything like a beautiful 
                           white fluffy blanket. My eyes wrinkle 
                           at their sides as I smile at the beauty 
                         of earths white crown. Children’s voices 
                            ring with laughter playing in the soft 
                      newly created playground and snow blowers 
                              start their engines with a loud roar.
                                  Also this happens every year.

                           I sit here in my warm cosy living room
                           with my fireplace burning, enjoying the 
                            warmth inside and the beauty outside,
                     until nature calls my dog to come check her out.
                  I open the door and the cold air slaps me to reality,
                      and those green eyes of mine turn greener as 
                       I think of my neighbors south of the boarder 
                        who are still walking around with shorts on,
                     and despite the cold my envy burns every year.


                                  Written by Brenda Meier-Hans 
                                                  12.17.2014
                                Contest: The Green Eyed Monster
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Roper Avatar
January 7, 2015 at 7:47 PM
Brenda, what a wonderful write, I love the picture you have painted for us to see.
Yvonne Avatar
January 3, 2015 at 10:04 AM
Congratulations on your top win Brenda with this masterful write! Lots Of Love Armand
Mehta Avatar
January 3, 2015 at 6:41 AM
Interesting and fantastic write on the theme of jealousy, congrats on the win, Brenda
Kayode Avatar
January 3, 2015 at 1:49 AM
Congrats on your fine win Brenda...huggs
A   Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 11:27 PM
BRENDA, Congratulations on your win. Awesome "Green-Eyed Monster, poem." Love LINDA
Stoner Jr Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 7:33 PM
Brenda be jealous be very jealous, best wishes from Tampa Florida, congratulations too by the way
Callus Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 3:36 PM
Congratulations on this lovely and merited win, Brenda. How I enjoyed those few final lines!! So green! Hope the new year is being kind to you...apart from winning contests:) // paul
Allison Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 2:40 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Brenda:-) Hugs Jan xx
Walker  Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 2:32 PM
As a winner of my contest, I congratulate you! Verlena
Meier-Hans Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 4:30 PM
Thank you so much for your generous placing Verlena
Kiser Avatar
December 18, 2014 at 3:40 PM
Grab a hot cup of cocoa and put on a summer movie. Don't worry, the winter chill will pass; it always does.
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 18, 2014 at 7:36 PM
Thanks, great idea. I am enjoying the Christmas movies right now but after Christmas I'll go straight to warm summer movies.
Taylor Avatar
December 18, 2014 at 2:37 PM
Good poem, I can picture the scene. I like the snow...but love watching it from inside in the warm!
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 18, 2014 at 7:38 PM
It is beautiful. I just hate being cold. Brrrrrrrr.
Trifiatis Avatar
December 18, 2014 at 4:48 AM
The scenery perfect for Christmas! You made me homesick, dear Brenda. I have missed snow at Christmas time! Your description vivid and captivating! Merry Christmas!
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 18, 2014 at 7:38 PM
Thank you. I wish you a Merry Christmas also Demetrios
Dunn Avatar
December 17, 2014 at 6:16 PM
Dear Brenda, Another right on mark homespun poem, I know what you are saying here, I love looking out my window and seeing such a wonderful picture perfect post card scene, but when I put the doggies out, oh man reality's cold chills me to the bone, geat job on this work, love the part about the fie place I miss having one, cheri
Allison Avatar
December 17, 2014 at 4:45 PM
Love your take on the theme - I too long for warmer weather and Like you envy those who do .... and I have green eyes too! Good Luck (7) Hugs Jan xxx
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 18, 2014 at 7:40 PM
Thanks Jan my green eyed friend. XOXO
Dietrich Avatar
December 17, 2014 at 3:57 PM
oh yes,I am jealous of those warm southern neighbors too. GOOD thinking outside the box for that contest.
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 18, 2014 at 7:40 PM
Thank you Andrea.
Meade Avatar
December 17, 2014 at 1:54 PM
I was in shorts yesterday . . . but have sweater today! Dogs love the colder weather . . . love the poem.
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 18, 2014 at 7:41 PM
Maybe you'll need snowshoes tomorrow David.
Petersen Potter Avatar
December 17, 2014 at 11:44 AM
Very beautiful pen Brenda! I truly ejoyed it dear friend. Come to Florida! G.L. In the contes! A 7 for you! :) Love and hugs! xxxxxx D.
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 18, 2014 at 7:43 PM
I love going to Florida Dorian. I can't wait to go back.
Chakrabarty Avatar
December 17, 2014 at 10:02 AM
Hi Brenda ! Lovely winter! Lovely frost ! Lovely coffee! you must be having ! Love-rajat
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 18, 2014 at 7:42 PM
Lovely Christmas cookies!
Manassian Avatar
December 17, 2014 at 9:45 AM
;) Good one, Brenda! Come on over here! Still get around without a jacket. The imagery was so beautiful in this piece...Hope our eyes don't get greener after reading this post! ;) HUGS
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 18, 2014 at 7:35 PM
They are emerald Eileen. You are so lucky.
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