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I look outside and see the snow running from the clouds and even though it’s hitting the pavement at top speed, it lands ever so gently and silently. This phenomenon amazes me every time it snows, which by the way may or may not be very often where I live but it does happen every year. It really is quite beautiful to look at when it covers everything like a beautiful white fluffy blanket. My eyes wrinkle at their sides as I smile at the beauty of earths white crown. Children’s voices ring with laughter playing in the soft newly created playground and snow blowers start their engines with a loud roar. Also this happens every year. I sit here in my warm cosy living room with my fireplace burning, enjoying the warmth inside and the beauty outside, until nature calls my dog to come check her out. I open the door and the cold air slaps me to reality, and those green eyes of mine turn greener as I think of my neighbors south of the boarder who are still walking around with shorts on, and despite the cold my envy burns every year. Written by Brenda Meier-Hans 12.17.2014 Contest: The Green Eyed Monster

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Date: 1/7/2015 7:47:00 PM
Brenda, what a wonderful write, I love the picture you have painted for us to see.
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Date: 1/3/2015 10:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your top win Brenda with this masterful write! Lots Of Love Armand
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Date: 1/3/2015 6:41:00 AM
Interesting and fantastic write on the theme of jealousy, congrats on the win, Brenda
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Date: 1/3/2015 1:49:00 AM
Congrats on your fine win Brenda...huggs
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Date: 1/2/2015 11:27:00 PM
BRENDA, Congratulations on your win. Awesome "Green-Eyed Monster, poem." Love LINDA
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Date: 1/2/2015 7:33:00 PM
Brenda be jealous be very jealous, best wishes from Tampa Florida, congratulations too by the way
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Date: 1/2/2015 3:36:00 PM
Congratulations on this lovely and merited win, Brenda. How I enjoyed those few final lines!! So green! Hope the new year is being kind to you...apart from winning contests:) // paul
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Date: 1/2/2015 2:40:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Brenda:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/2/2015 2:32:00 PM
As a winner of my contest, I congratulate you! Verlena
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 1/2/2015 4:30:00 PM
Thank you so much for your generous placing Verlena
Date: 12/18/2014 3:40:00 PM
Grab a hot cup of cocoa and put on a summer movie. Don't worry, the winter chill will pass; it always does.
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 12/18/2014 7:36:00 PM
Thanks, great idea. I am enjoying the Christmas movies right now but after Christmas I'll go straight to warm summer movies.
Date: 12/18/2014 2:37:00 PM
Good poem, I can picture the scene. I like the snow...but love watching it from inside in the warm!
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 12/18/2014 7:38:00 PM
It is beautiful. I just hate being cold. Brrrrrrrr.
Date: 12/18/2014 4:48:00 AM
The scenery perfect for Christmas! You made me homesick, dear Brenda. I have missed snow at Christmas time! Your description vivid and captivating! Merry Christmas!
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 12/18/2014 7:38:00 PM
Thank you. I wish you a Merry Christmas also Demetrios
Date: 12/17/2014 6:16:00 PM
Dear Brenda, Another right on mark homespun poem, I know what you are saying here, I love looking out my window and seeing such a wonderful picture perfect post card scene, but when I put the doggies out, oh man reality's cold chills me to the bone, geat job on this work, love the part about the fie place I miss having one, cheri
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Date: 12/17/2014 4:45:00 PM
Love your take on the theme - I too long for warmer weather and Like you envy those who do .... and I have green eyes too! Good Luck (7) Hugs Jan xxx
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 12/18/2014 7:40:00 PM
Thanks Jan my green eyed friend. XOXO
Date: 12/17/2014 3:57:00 PM
oh yes,I am jealous of those warm southern neighbors too. GOOD thinking outside the box for that contest.
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 12/18/2014 7:40:00 PM
Thank you Andrea.
Date: 12/17/2014 1:54:00 PM
I was in shorts yesterday . . . but have sweater today! Dogs love the colder weather . . . love the poem.
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 12/18/2014 7:41:00 PM
Maybe you'll need snowshoes tomorrow David.
Date: 12/17/2014 11:44:00 AM
Very beautiful pen Brenda! I truly ejoyed it dear friend. Come to Florida! G.L. In the contes! A 7 for you! :) Love and hugs! xxxxxx D.
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 12/18/2014 7:43:00 PM
I love going to Florida Dorian. I can't wait to go back.
Date: 12/17/2014 10:02:00 AM
Hi Brenda ! Lovely winter! Lovely frost ! Lovely coffee! you must be having ! Love-rajat
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 12/18/2014 7:42:00 PM
Lovely Christmas cookies!
Date: 12/17/2014 9:45:00 AM
;) Good one, Brenda! Come on over here! Still get around without a jacket. The imagery was so beautiful in this piece...Hope our eyes don't get greener after reading this post! ;) HUGS
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 12/18/2014 7:35:00 PM
They are emerald Eileen. You are so lucky.

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