Frozen

“Winter of despair grips the fallow mind, as lancet wind of desolation slices solace, the song of sad bird freezes in silence”- by poet In the frame of the reclined verdant bough, opulent with the fine filigree of emerald foliage, a delicate design I made with love-laced twigs for the nest of my adoring desire, I weaved with the finesse of fervor. On the wings of winter wafting in polar wind, the wilted leaves of my longing blew away rustling to the realm of nowhere. Dismal in my frosted nest on the skeletal tree, I counted in heartbeat the footsteps of twilight. My yearning turned into glacial embrace, you escaped from the fold of frozen love, flew away far to the sun soaked sky. Desolate in freezing darkness of the arctic nest, I live in memory with the frozen feather you left. _______________ February 17, 2023 Theme chosen : Frozen Contest : Writing Challenge - F Words Sponsored by : Constance La France
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Rodrigues Avatar
February 21, 2023 at 5:20 PM
I love the imagery set up from the beginning… In the frame of the reclined verdant bough, opulent with the fine filigree of emerald foliage, a delicate design I made with love-laced twigs…Congratulations, Subimal!
Kendrick Avatar
February 21, 2023 at 8:03 AM
Congratulations on this winner in Constance's contest. Way to go. Sara
La France Avatar
February 21, 2023 at 2:41 AM
Subimal, a beautiful poem and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge F Words, well done, I like your quote also, blessings, Constance
Chuuk Avatar
February 17, 2023 at 8:21 PM
Beautifully touching. Best wishes I. The contest. :)
Andresen Avatar
February 17, 2023 at 3:39 AM
- This was beautiful in sadness, Subimal - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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