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Frosty Is Having a Meltdown

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The snowman charged with trespassing 
        as his face was melting and his carrot
    was floating, like driftwood in threshold 
crossing. Santa and his reindeer
        pull out the naughty list. Frosty is
         not the one who’s in trouble. “Sorry
     Frosty,” says Santa, “you must melt
   a little bit longer as your neighbor
 gets madder and madder - turns
   Christmas Red, like Rudolph’s sporty nose,
            so I can gage how much coal 
              I need to have the naughty department sack.
   I’ll be back my friend
             to put you
                 back
      together
              again…
                            on Dancer…on Vixen”****
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12/9/2021

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Date: 12/11/2021 6:06:00 AM
Poor Frosty! What a cute and interesting concept for this one Kim!! Happy Saturday xxoo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/11/2021 6:46:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 12/10/2021 1:56:00 AM
Poor Snowman. It's not cold enough :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/10/2021 5:04:00 AM
We see very few snowmen around here in the South ;) ~hugs
Date: 12/9/2021 3:47:00 PM
Hello Kim! I love this. Thanks for the smile. Merry Christmas.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/9/2021 6:32:00 PM
Thank you, Debra! Merry Christmas!
Date: 12/9/2021 3:23:00 PM
Hello Kim, oh -I- do not know if I would trust Santato put Frosty back together again. He may for get. Hugs.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/10/2021 11:33:00 AM
Hello Kim, my inner voice tells me not to. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/9/2021 6:31:00 PM
So true!
Date: 12/9/2021 1:57:00 PM
Kim my love... very Christmasy! Cute... Love, Happy Jack XOXOX
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/9/2021 3:00:00 PM
Thanks! Be merry, my friend!

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