Notes About The Poem

Frosty Is Having a Meltdown

The snowman charged with trespassing 
        as his face was melting and his carrot
    was floating, like driftwood in threshold 
crossing. Santa and his reindeer
        pull out the naughty list. Frosty is
         not the one who’s in trouble. “Sorry
     Frosty,” says Santa, “you must melt
   a little bit longer as your neighbor
 gets madder and madder - turns
   Christmas Red, like Rudolph’s sporty nose,
            so I can gage how much coal 
              I need to have the naughty department sack.
   I’ll be back my friend
             to put you
                 back
      together
              again…
                            on Dancer…on Vixen”****
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12/9/2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Gentile Avatar
December 11, 2021 at 6:06 AM
Poor Frosty! What a cute and interesting concept for this one Kim!! Happy Saturday xxoo
Rodrigues Avatar
December 11, 2021 at 6:46 AM
Thank you!
Buhagiar Avatar
December 10, 2021 at 1:56 AM
Poor Snowman. It's not cold enough :)
Rodrigues Avatar
December 10, 2021 at 5:04 AM
We see very few snowmen around here in the South ;) ~hugs
Brown Avatar
December 9, 2021 at 3:47 PM
Hello Kim! I love this. Thanks for the smile. Merry Christmas.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 9, 2021 at 6:32 PM
Thank you, Debra! Merry Christmas!
De Beaulieu Avatar
December 9, 2021 at 3:23 PM
Hello Kim, oh -I- do not know if I would trust Santato put Frosty back together again. He may for get. Hugs.
De Beaulieu Avatar
December 10, 2021 at 11:33 AM
Hello Kim, my inner voice tells me not to. Hugs.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 9, 2021 at 6:31 PM
So true!
Ellison Avatar
December 9, 2021 at 1:57 PM
Kim my love... very Christmasy! Cute... Love, Happy Jack XOXOX
Rodrigues Avatar
December 9, 2021 at 3:00 PM
Thanks! Be merry, my friend!
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