Premiere Contest WinnerFrosty Birth

POTD : 17.12.25
Down into the womb was frosty white. I travelled with an alluring pink Being, for part of journey. She appeared about half way down. I sensed objet d'art energy, one who was often nearby, 
deciphering : “You chose winter, patterned to transmute darkness into light ”. This I did not recall. Nevertheless she stated it decisively. 

Her hush : “What day do you long to appear ?” A triangle, with a short line across its horizontal axis, flashed. 
Pinky validated : “Four”, then vanished. I chose the fourth, in the middle month of a hippie year, a winter’s month, in a southern shackled land. An oscillating fall continued, gravity pulling spirit’s descent into a womb, to express in a four month foetus.

Vibrating spirals and petals in a dusky pre-birth crossing, rooting into a country grey chained ; parameters set for a drama in rimy images. Other lifetimes became glacially clear, along a territorial path : peasant, healer, priestess, warrior, governess, spans of trauma, to unpeel. 

Though the womb felt safe, a skinny mother as depository for an unwelcome pregnancy, added to external gelidity ~ an inclement birth in darkling hours of raw June, hailstorm raging.
 
I rocked in my mother's pacing of a dim passage, up-down in labour pains, throbbing not to harm her. An innovative spirit, with like constellation origin, we were to reflect each other’s shadowy light. Betrayal was one curriculum lesson. The pungent odour of nicotine from my father's Pall Mall wisped at the door. 

Wight plumping for explosion through a turbulent night, past twelve, the fourth day had arrived. Ready was body to birth, to accomplish contracted missions on Earth. Candlelight helixed with incense vapour, a strong North-Westerly wind blasting. Salty sea granules swept into the room from the Atlantic, low slate clouds looming at ajar window. I sensed Pinky near the birthing table, diminishing fear. 

“She’s here !” Gravity’s forceps wriggled babe from comforting womb waters, into a crackling hailstorm ~ contracted in another dimension. As skull appeared, I ached to scream, to return to where Light was, where Real Home prevailed. Too late ! Gaia had summoned my presence.

Babe sought to ooze out, upwards from constrictive flesh, futility’s first frosty breath opposed. A midwife slapped wee brown buttocks. Ouch ! A cruel human introduction to a dense, florid blue-green planet, next eighty years was already essayed. 
                                                                 
we agree to birth
our missions are contracted
frost does not matter
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Hind Avatar
December 18, 2025 at 9:32 PM
YESSSS Congrats on POTD!!! BELATED sorry!! <3 xxoo
Nicole Avatar
December 17, 2025 at 6:54 PM
Such a deep and powerful story. Congratulations Ghairo, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
Daniels Avatar
December 17, 2025 at 7:46 PM
ThkU, Brandy. Hugs Returned, Dearest One. Sending Sunrays from down below. X.
Goldsmith Avatar
December 17, 2025 at 10:42 AM
Congratulations on your POTD  win. I enjoyed reading your "Frosty Birth" write. Have a blessed day with your win...............
Daniels Avatar
December 17, 2025 at 6:07 PM
ThkU, Paula for read & Blessings. You too have a blessed day.......
Rodgers Avatar
December 17, 2025 at 7:44 AM
Dear Ghairo, Back to say Congratulations on POTD. It is so worth it! Holiday Blessings, Dear Ghairo, Daniel
Daniels Avatar
December 17, 2025 at 8:29 AM
Blessings returned, Dear DHR. (Remember we trust humanity when we trust ourselves, since each island a part of the whole. Not to overdo seasons fruit mince, with or without AI at table. x.
Jones Avatar
December 17, 2025 at 5:00 AM
Wow this pulls me into the moment! Great write deserving of potd!
Daniels Avatar
December 17, 2025 at 8:19 AM
ThkU for read, KJ. Christmassy Blessings. Sending you an etheric amethyst into your Third Eye.x.
Gifford Avatar
December 17, 2025 at 2:04 AM
Hello Ghairo, congratulations on your amazingly beautiful poem being featured on POTD. An excellent read, my friend.
Daniels Avatar
December 17, 2025 at 2:58 AM
ThKU for pop-in, Zyrool. I appreciate your visit. X.
Buhagiar Avatar
December 17, 2025 at 1:38 AM
I want you to know that you've done well on your top win. You deserve it. A life pilgrimage that heartens the soul. A very intelligent haibun.
Daniels Avatar
December 17, 2025 at 3:00 AM
ThkU Victor ! Appreciate such a beautiful comment from an experienced Poet. Blessings.
Kauffman Avatar
December 16, 2025 at 11:50 AM
Congratulations on your trophy win, Ghairo. There is a mystical sense to your journey as your soul "squeezes" out of mortality. Blessings to you on your life pilgrimage. Wonderful imagery.
Daniels Avatar
December 16, 2025 at 3:55 PM
ThkU 4 pop-in Sam. Do appreciate. Not ready yet to squeeze out of mortality. Highly unlikely that I’ll squeeze out, more like will be wisped escorted. x.
Ashley Avatar
December 15, 2025 at 6:05 PM
Dear Ghairo, I adore the lush language, vivid imagery and creative intensity of your poem. Your haiku punctuates the fascinating journey of your prose perfectly. Indeed many lifetimes lived leaves lots of “trauma to unpeel”. This is an expansive and exquisite creation, my dear poet friend. A big congratulations for your golden trophy win in Tom’s contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Daniels Avatar
December 15, 2025 at 8:38 PM
ThkU, Dearest Susan. Now that I read your entry to Tom’s contest, my own pales in the face of your ability to voice the cusp phenomenons the Soul needs to grapple with in order to Know Divinity first hand. Sending high frequency Light to your Beingness & any physical pain. Great Love.
Hind Avatar
December 15, 2025 at 4:08 PM
Wow!!! Congrats on your win!!! I may have not interpreted it right, but I could still feel it- my sincerest congrats <3 xxoo
Daniels Avatar
December 15, 2025 at 5:16 PM
Xxxooo!
Hind Avatar
December 15, 2025 at 1:05 PM
It almost sounds like you are missing Gaia... but are ready to take on the frost of this lifetime, which you agreed to and do not remember agreeing to...thus it's ..."inclement" sometimes. Beautiful imagery throughout- beautiful language leading into each stanza.... wow!!! <3 xxoo
Daniels Avatar
December 15, 2025 at 5:25 PM
ThkU for read, dear Paige. No, I didn’t want to come back, but they said “Michael Jackson is there !” Lol.
Rodgers Avatar
December 15, 2025 at 9:36 AM
Dear Ghairo, I was really drawn into the way you described that descent into the womb, the spirals, petals, and even the storm outside made it feel like a whole life journey. It left me feeling like birth itself was created as both fragile and powerful. Very paradoxical! Holiday Blessings, Dear Ghairo, Daniel
Daniels Avatar
December 15, 2025 at 11:06 AM
ThkU as always for your comment, Sir. Best 2 U., Dear Daniel.
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