Frost Like Filigree

~ Frost
         by
             design
~ delicate,
       crafted in the night,
            dainty — like lacy handiwork
~ inspirational, like twisted wire, a story told —
details meted out behind heaven’s door, with peculiarities that we adore


~ O
      please
         inspect
            windowpane 
crystalline effects ~
       ~ seraphic white silver and gold —
the finest craftsmanship, twisted with Eden’s treasure ~
filigree beads of angelic hoary-breath, reminders of the invisible God


~ Rime
clings
   to soil,
inspired world —
   embraced by cold hands ~
          fragile tendrils spread like ivy,
                      intricate cherubic smithing — like spider webbing,
subtleties sensational, O how it sparkles ~ seasonal diamondiferous earth


1/24/2018
The Magic Of Three
Sponsored by: Broken Wings
Fibonacci (8 lines) x 3 = 24 lines(pattern- 1 1 2 3 5 8 13 21 syllables)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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La France Avatar
February 13, 2018 at 2:20 PM
Kim, congratulations on your win in my contest with this pretty poem !
Wigley Avatar
February 13, 2018 at 12:37 AM
End to end, wall to wall lovely, Kim. A super Fibonacci. Well done! Viv x
Roper Avatar
February 12, 2018 at 9:47 PM
Congratulations on your win, Kim! Great poem. Hugs Eve ~`*
Gauthier Avatar
February 11, 2018 at 6:54 PM
Lovely poem. And... "seasonal diamondiferous earth" is the perfect climax.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 11, 2018 at 7:57 PM
Thank you, Line!
Brewer Avatar
January 25, 2018 at 3:20 PM
A brilliant construction and execution to wonderful effect. Creates a true aesthetic frisson of pleasure in the reading. Congratulations on this small masterpiece, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 25, 2018 at 3:37 PM
Thank you, Geoffrey!
Lamoureux Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 7:51 AM
One of the best I have read for Constance’s contest. Bravo.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 7:58 AM
Thanks so much, Richard!
Gentile Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 7:43 AM
This is just beautiful, Kim. it just feels heavenly !! Good Luck in the contest xxoo
Rodrigues Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 7:44 AM
Thanks so much, Mike! <3 ...Kim
Michael Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 7:35 AM
A wonderful poem...You describe it like the earth would do...All the best Kim
Rodrigues Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 7:37 AM
Thanks, Arturo!
Allison Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 7:34 AM
Wow Kim your poem is absolutely breath taking and I know Constance will LOVE it! Good luck in the contest... into my faves it is a little gem:-) hugs jan xx
Rodrigues Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 7:37 AM
Oh, thank you so much! Kisses <3
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