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Frost Like Filigree

~ Frost by design ~ delicate, crafted in the night, dainty — like lacy handiwork ~ inspirational, like twisted wire, a story told — details meted out behind heaven’s door, with peculiarities that we adore ~ O please inspect windowpane crystalline effects ~ ~ seraphic white silver and gold — the finest craftsmanship, twisted with Eden’s treasure ~ filigree beads of angelic hoary-breath, reminders of the invisible God ~ Rime clings to soil, inspired world — embraced by cold hands ~ fragile tendrils spread like ivy, intricate cherubic smithing — like spider webbing, subtleties sensational, O how it sparkles ~ seasonal diamondiferous earth 1/24/2018 The Magic Of Three Sponsored by: Broken Wings Fibonacci (8 lines) x 3 = 24 lines(pattern- 1 1 2 3 5 8 13 21 syllables)

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Date: 2/13/2018 2:20:00 PM
Kim, congratulations on your win in my contest with this pretty poem !
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Date: 2/13/2018 12:37:00 AM
End to end, wall to wall lovely, Kim. A super Fibonacci. Well done! Viv x
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Date: 2/12/2018 9:47:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Kim! Great poem. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 2/11/2018 6:54:00 PM
Lovely poem. And... "seasonal diamondiferous earth" is the perfect climax.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/11/2018 7:57:00 PM
Thank you, Line!
Date: 1/25/2018 3:20:00 PM
A brilliant construction and execution to wonderful effect. Creates a true aesthetic frisson of pleasure in the reading. Congratulations on this small masterpiece, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/25/2018 3:37:00 PM
Thank you, Geoffrey!
Date: 1/24/2018 7:51:00 AM
One of the best I have read for Constance’s contest. Bravo.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/24/2018 7:58:00 AM
Thanks so much, Richard!
Date: 1/24/2018 7:43:00 AM
This is just beautiful, Kim. it just feels heavenly !! Good Luck in the contest xxoo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/24/2018 7:44:00 AM
Thanks so much, Mike! <3 ...Kim
Date: 1/24/2018 7:35:00 AM
A wonderful poem...You describe it like the earth would do...All the best Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/24/2018 7:37:00 AM
Thanks, Arturo!
Date: 1/24/2018 7:34:00 AM
Wow Kim your poem is absolutely breath taking and I know Constance will LOVE it! Good luck in the contest... into my faves it is a little gem:-) hugs jan xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/24/2018 7:37:00 AM
Oh, thank you so much! Kisses <3

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