Nayda Ivette Negron Flores Poet Dodoitsu

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Frost

White blanket coats the valley
                               Dusk augurs hibernation
                              Icicles hang in home roofs
                               Chilled air forecasts frost












11-5-2015

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Michael Tor November 17, 2015 at 2:01 AM Lovely write Nayda. Nayda Ivette Negron Flores November 17, 2015 at 5:05 AM Thank you very much Michael.

Andrea Dietrich November 7, 2015 at 8:18 PM also a nice one for her contest. Watch your subject verb agreement: chilled air forecasts and icicles hang. She might be picky on grammar. Nayda Ivette Negron Flores November 7, 2015 at 8:34 PM Thank you for your advice Andrea. I will make the necessary changes.