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From Whence Do Poems Come

From whence do poems come? Some say-- they're children of the heart, others say-- they're born in the mind's maze but I say-- poems come from deeper than any heart and from somewhere far more vast than any mind.... I suspect they come from that part of us that lies under the unconscious, so quiet, so subtle many never sense it-- but there, in the soul (the endless mind, the imperishable self) are found the words to percolate through the blind and dense unconscious to appear sudden, unbidden, unexpected in the daylight mind.... But their journey is still only half-done: when read by a stranger those poems transcend disparate worlds, making their return journey from a daylight mind through the unlit unconscious until the reader's own soul feels brushed by Wonder... yet from where do the poems come? They come from Eternity.

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Date: 5/24/2020 1:35:00 PM
Clever stuff here LJ. The universal consciousness is not a easy concept to deliver. But here you've done it without upsetting traditional religious thinking. Kudos to you. Well crafted. Well framed. Well done.
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Date: 11/27/2019 11:18:00 PM
Lovely poem, LJ.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 11/28/2019 11:33:00 AM
Thank you, Line
Date: 12/10/2018 12:18:00 AM
- Congratulations on this great winning poem, L.J. :) - At the same time I wish you and your family a peaceful and lovely Christmas :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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L. J. Carber
Date: 12/10/2018 8:40:00 AM
Thank you,Sunshine, and may I wish you and yours a very happy Christmas and a blessed new year!
Date: 12/8/2018 9:52:00 PM
Enjoyed reading ,L.J.,congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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L. J. Carber
Date: 12/9/2018 6:51:00 AM
Thanks Eve, I'm glad you liked it.
Date: 12/8/2018 10:30:00 AM
Where do they come from indeed.. I guess from the heart for many.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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L. J. Carber
Date: 12/8/2018 2:05:00 PM
Thank you, Silent One, I feel honored.
Date: 10/7/2018 3:58:00 AM
Congratulations L.J. The wonder of your poetic muse has inspired you well! Regards // paul
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L. J. Carber
Date: 10/7/2018 9:10:00 AM
Thank you, Paul, I appreciate it!
Date: 10/6/2018 7:39:00 PM
Self expression well captured in its essence. Congrats on your top placement. SuZ
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L. J. Carber
Date: 10/6/2018 9:55:00 PM
Thank you, Suz!
Date: 10/4/2018 8:54:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning write, L.J. They come from a far away land called "imagination" :)
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L. J. Carber
Date: 10/5/2018 7:13:00 AM
Thank you Daniel-- and yes, that is a vast land!
Date: 10/4/2018 5:12:00 PM
'are found the words to percolate through the blind, dense unconscious to appear sudden,unbidden, unexpected in the daylight mind....' These profound words, L.J., describe so eloquently how poetry is perceived by the poet! Congratulations on your deserving First Placement! : )
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L. J. Carber
Date: 10/5/2018 7:14:00 AM
Connie, thank you, and as always, your thoughtful words are much valued.
Date: 10/4/2018 4:12:00 PM
This was a pleasure to read L.J - I was 'with you' all through the interesting thought process right up to the conclusion. I too am amazed by the power of the imagination to take us on incredible journeys. Best wishes Wendy
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L. J. Carber
Date: 10/5/2018 7:14:00 AM
Thank you very much, Wendy (my wife's name!)
Date: 8/30/2018 5:17:00 PM
Hello L.J.Cartier,poems can come from anywhere and everywhere. For myself,sometimes in my sleep. Have anice evening my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/31/2018 3:28:00 PM
Hello L.J. Carber,at least you are awake to write these ideas down.I just get the title down and take it from there. It works for me. Have a nice day my friend.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 8/31/2018 9:02:00 AM
It's funny you mentioned sleep, Darlene-- most of them seem to come to me in the morning, soon after I've awakened.
Date: 8/24/2018 3:43:00 PM
This is stunning, L.J. Love the phrase "to appear sudden, unbidden, unexpected in the daylight mind....". Fave.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 8/25/2018 8:09:00 AM
Thank you Agnes-- I'm very happy you liked it
Date: 8/24/2018 1:52:00 PM
This is quite profound. I enjoyed it immensely.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 8/25/2018 8:09:00 AM
Thanks Jesse-- I'm glad you liked it

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