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From Two Feet Above

From two feet above. I could see myself. I had jumped off the boat into water over my head. I wished I were back in the boat instead of waiting to breath. I could see myself walking along the bottom of the lake. I was about three feet tall then. A child and yet a man as I walked. I had made it to shore at long last with a gasp. I had walked ten feet to shore as I had never walked before. I felt in my windedness, I belonged back there. Why I asked myself, I am not a fish. John H. Hardison..

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Date: 6/2/2016 11:10:00 AM
Such an experience! I read this as a child would have written it and it is fascinating. Congrats on the selection. daver
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John Hardison
Date: 6/2/2016 9:37:00 PM
Thanks Much for your comment. Remembered it vividly as child. Much frighten by it then but wanting to go back. Find it strange now. It's nice to be featured. Thanks again. Peace, Love and Joy

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