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From the Outside Looking In

Obviously we see others from the outside looking in – therefore, what one sees is not all that is present – the good, bad and ugly hiding and surfacing using text not always privy the reader – the writer and reader coming from different planes of reference. One wanting to be informed or entertained… while the other, wanting, clearly, to exorcise both his living and dead. We expel far more than we protect – keeping the true value where the spirit dwells and the soul expresses free of shallow judgment. Those who live on in name are not the inventors of chariots – with their loud, squeaking wheels...but those brave enough to follow the beat of a human heart back to its loving source….

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Date: 10/30/2020 12:55:00 PM
Wow this is wonderful Joe! Insightful beyond what most think and feel. A fave for me my friend. Blessings xxoo
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Joe Dimino
Date: 12/24/2020 10:20:00 AM
Hi Connie; sorry for not seeing your comment sooner; I truly appreciate you taking the time to read and comment on my work. Blessings my friend!!
Date: 10/15/2020 11:34:00 AM
- Yes it is important to think about "the writer and reader coming from different planes of reference "... get thoughts to fly ... great written, Joe :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Joe Dimino
Date: 10/15/2020 1:13:00 PM
Hi Sunshine! Thank you. Have a beautiful day!!
Date: 10/15/2020 7:51:00 AM
Wow Joe. Great poem! :)
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Joe Dimino
Date: 10/15/2020 1:15:00 PM
Hi Heidi; thank you for the encouragement. Blessings my friend!
Date: 10/15/2020 7:17:00 AM
Interesting thoughts and I guess writing is abstract and subjective in the readers eyes...interesting line about living on name and not inventions.... I think most things go back to the loving source...
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Date: 10/15/2020 1:17:00 PM
Thank you for the analysis, my friend. I treasure such feedback, not always certain myself as to why I write something, and what are the deeper meanings, if any, in my works. Have a beautiful day, Si. Blessings!

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