From the Nest of a Poem

The time you breezed
into my life
you’ve opened
my heart
and let me felt
a love
once more

your love
shined bright
like a sportlight
conquered my heart
with your blink- less passions

everytime you questioned me
did i love you so
i just didnt know how to reply
and filled me with teary nuance

like a helpless kitten
on a kitchen
stubborned 
disobedience to your commands

i knew how to sing
i knew how to praise
but 
i just didnt know how to say

what have i done 
to deserve your love
a very extraordinary 
golden love
silken smoothness
honey tasted

the love that swayed
from left to right
in your poetic heart
colored my basic emotions

not try to entomb my silence
let the poems 
speak love from its silence
to express the feelings

as the sky kissing the earth
from the nest of a poem
breeze you comfort
delicate drops
of my love
till eternity

~(c)sukmawati komala~
21 march 2013
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Duncan Avatar
March 31, 2013 at 6:08 PM
Oh I like Sukmawati,, happy have a blessed Easter ;}
Kendrick Avatar
March 31, 2013 at 4:03 PM
Very expressive work that you have penned in this one..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for your visits..Your comments are very encouraging..Sara
Gasun Avatar
March 30, 2013 at 9:12 PM
Sooo beautiful poem my dearest friend! I'm deeply moved while reading it! Thank you so much for continuously sharing your precious gem and superb talents. Big big sweet hugs to you! Have a great & lovely day! love much, Leonora
Sathasivam Avatar
March 30, 2013 at 7:14 AM
Excellent. Very touching write. Enjoyed. Tfs
Nair Avatar
March 29, 2013 at 6:32 PM
Delicate poem on love again, nice one, Suk, how are you?, luv:) Jag
Dietrich Avatar
March 29, 2013 at 5:57 PM
your poetry always has such beautiful imagery. this is lovely.
Harrell Avatar
March 29, 2013 at 4:37 PM
Oh, pure poetic, flowery words. Love it, Sukmawati :)
Williams Avatar
March 29, 2013 at 12:02 PM
Sukmawati this is excellent...David
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