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From the Iron Cemetery

My grandfather worked with metal until the day he died. He used to say, No one has ever seen the true face of iron. We cannot truly know its form of yesterday, nor its shape of tomorrow. For iron, of which 25 million tons of scrap are reborn each year, the electric furnace is both a cemetery and a cradle. Iron’s death does not remain in one place. After death, birth awaits. Grandfather said, People enter the cemetery only once, but are rocked in the cradle many times, not knowing how to live— without realizing that today’s airplane will become tomorrow’s can, without knowing that iron stands next to them. Today, at the intersection, we pass by iron, again.

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Date: 5/26/2025 10:08:00 PM
Shinsaku, Fine write from a storied grandfather's musings in iron's timeless life cycle. The ore pulled from the Earth, perhaps coalesced from some distant star; in another system's fiery forge. Wouldn't that be ironic? -Richard
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Shinsaku Ashida
Date: 5/26/2025 10:16:00 PM
Thank you so much for your wonderful comment, Richard. I’m truly grateful that you took the time to read and reflect on my poem. Your idea of the iron’s journey from distant stars is fascinating – it feels like the poem has found a larger story. Thanks again for your thoughtful words!

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