From the Iron Cemetery

My grandfather worked with metal
until the day he died.
He used to say,
No one has ever seen
the true face of iron.
We cannot truly know
its form of yesterday,
nor its shape of tomorrow.
For iron,
of which 25 million tons
of scrap are reborn each year,
the electric furnace
is both a cemetery
and a cradle.
Iron’s death
does not remain in one place.
After death,
birth awaits.
Grandfather said,
People enter the cemetery only once,
but are rocked in the cradle
many times,
not knowing how to live—
without realizing
that today’s airplane
will become tomorrow’s can,
without knowing
that iron stands
next to them.
Today,
at the intersection,
we pass by
iron,
again.
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Theraven Avatar
May 26, 2025 at 10:08 PM
Shinsaku, Fine write from a storied grandfather's musings in iron's timeless life cycle. The ore pulled from the Earth, perhaps coalesced from some distant star; in another system's fiery forge. Wouldn't that be ironic? -Richard
Ashida Avatar
May 26, 2025 at 10:16 PM
Thank you so much for your wonderful comment, Richard. I’m truly grateful that you took the time to read and reflect on my poem. Your idea of the iron’s journey from distant stars is fascinating – it feels like the poem has found a larger story. Thanks again for your thoughtful words!
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