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From the Heart


he
smiled
and told me
how i was beautiful
he suffered from cataracts
but nonetheless
he was sweet
in such a
loving
way



AP: 2nd place 2020

Copyright © Line Gauthier | Year Posted 2019

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Panagiota Romios

June 28, 2019 at 8:32 PM

Gee, Line..getting a beautiful compliment from a man with or without cataracts is wonderful. Cataracts don't require a slap as a poet said below. Gee, what's the world coming to? Delightful Poem Panagiota

June 28, 2019 at 8:42 PM

LOL Always better to assume the best.

June 28, 2019 at 9:08 AM

Cute humor :)

June 28, 2019 at 6:39 PM

Thanks, Kim. Much appreciated.

Caren Krutsinger

June 28, 2019 at 4:56 AM

I think some of the loveliest men know what to say to their wives, which is how they keep being lovely. Nice one.

June 28, 2019 at 5:32 AM

Absolutely, Caren. They are charming to the core.

June 27, 2019 at 4:39 PM

A different woman might have slapped the guy... Nice write, Line. :) gw

June 27, 2019 at 5:41 PM

LOL considering the man is my husband, I am always flattered.

Timothy Mcguire

June 27, 2019 at 4:11 PM

Funny! He also loved the way sang, especially with his hearing aids on!

June 27, 2019 at 5:41 PM

LOL same guy.

June 27, 2019 at 2:07 PM

ha! sweet and funny...

June 27, 2019 at 4:10 PM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Ilene.

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