From the Brink

As my fingers trace your silhouette mind
And the strength returns straight from your love’s heart,
Those your shoulders that held me safe I find
No more to dwell in life’s shadowy part.

Everyday a stepping stone across strife
Each tender touch and words spoken ring out,
Eyes that see the same yet different life
Your love grows in me in you there’s no doubt.

To take the wrong road the right path a choice
Alone there was only one direction,
When in dispute one opinion one voice
You did instigate life’s resurrection.

In pursuit of those the headiest days
Found an alternative with wondrous ways.

© Harry J Horsman 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Vaso Avatar
June 6, 2014 at 5:17 PM
This is amazing!
Hamilton Avatar
April 15, 2014 at 5:14 AM
this is exquisite Harry I love a great sonnet hugs
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April 6, 2014 at 8:55 AM
I am not sure if you are referring to Jesus but if you are, you have captured the greatest Love of all. I very much enjoyed this trancendent piece Harry.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
March 27, 2014 at 9:33 AM
time for another one xx
Thirtyseven Avatar
March 26, 2014 at 3:01 AM
A lovely poem that drips with sincerity. Well penned.
Dietrich Avatar
March 22, 2014 at 4:40 PM
Hi, Harry, just stopping by to say hi and I hope you are doing ok.
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 9:23 PM
A beautiful sonnet you have created Harry. blessings,
A   Avatar
March 12, 2014 at 9:53 PM
a beautiful poem Harry, thank you for sharing, the wonderful feeling of reality... Linda
Johnson Avatar
March 12, 2014 at 8:28 PM
Sweet salvation. This has an air of your personal truth. And if it is. I think we're all just so happy for you. Wonderful write Harry. Peace. :)
Dietrich Avatar
March 1, 2014 at 10:40 PM
wow, what a great sonnet for someone special, I'd say!! This is so beautiful, Harry. How are you doing these days?
Makama Avatar
February 28, 2014 at 11:09 AM
Absolutely brilliant. Thanks for making my day. I have found it pleasurable to always begin the weekend with Poetrysoup because poets like you and poems like this do not disappoint. Have a lovely weekend
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February 28, 2014 at 8:23 AM
Excellently worded with perfect vision of real love. Loved much your idealistic vision. Loved always, my lovely friend, bl
Onclaud Avatar
February 26, 2014 at 9:47 AM
amazing job, harry.. your words of light passion shines!.. huggs
Williams Avatar
February 22, 2014 at 2:18 PM
Harry just back for a re-read of this gem...David
Trifiatis Avatar
February 22, 2014 at 5:25 AM
What a melody of the heart it is! Captivating, romantic, loving and beautiful! Enjoyed it a lot!! A 7!
Kendrick Avatar
February 17, 2014 at 3:11 PM
Enjoyed reading your sonnet today..Very expressive of the emotions of life..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Williams Avatar
February 16, 2014 at 1:37 PM
Hey Harry, love this very romantic piece, good there is someone to guide....David
Bolton Avatar
February 16, 2014 at 8:36 AM
A very good sonnet, Harry. Sometimes the alternative is really the right choice.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
February 16, 2014 at 8:26 AM
wow I am the first to comment and I am surprised ...this is the best and will receive so many I'm sure it is lovely harry so full of meaning to those that see the depth of you your insight wisdom and yes your love of words xx
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