From Sunrise To Sunset

Aurora begins collecting daybreak’s embers -
sparking them till sun has caught on fire.
If fortunate, we get to waken to blue skies
as sun rises higher and higher.

Brightly comes daylight – eventually fading
after its zenith has been reached.
Sun worshippers know very well
precious light by nightfall can’t be leeched.

Soon twilight unfurls vibrancy wondrously -
colors whose beauty can sometimes make us sigh.
Pink or persimmon dissolve into the sea,
or violet we might see streak the sky!

Aug. 2, 2021 for Joseph May's Alpha Lines Poetry Contest
submitted Aug. 12 for A Brian Strand You Choose Poetry Contest

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Date: 9/2/2024 6:35:00 PM
Gorgeous writing, definitely- <3
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Date: 8/14/2021 2:18:00 AM
Congrats on this winner. Way to go. A day in the life of a poet. Sara
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Date: 8/13/2021 9:22:00 AM
What an imagery! so cleverly flowed from sunrise to sunset.
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Date: 8/12/2021 11:01:00 PM
Beautifully penned. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 8/9/2021 6:56:00 AM
Beautiful write Andrea, Congrats on your win
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Date: 8/8/2021 4:56:00 PM
Back with congrats, Andrea, on your win in Joseph's contest.
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Date: 8/8/2021 2:29:00 PM
Great imagery, Andrea, I was never a sun worshipper, I develop heat stroke very easy. Congratulations on your win in Joseph's contest. Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/8/2021 3:57:00 AM
Hi Andrea , I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your winning write. It was well deserved. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Date: 8/8/2021 1:06:00 AM
Mesmerizing!!
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Date: 8/6/2021 6:55:00 AM
I like the line, "Aurora begins collection daylight's embers." Such poetic lines.
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Date: 8/4/2021 1:30:00 AM
SUCH Beauty depicted in your lines, Andrea, you have penned this well:)
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Date: 8/3/2021 12:21:00 PM
Smashing illustration of a passing day. I looked at the contest but couldn’t get my head around it. Good luck, Andrea. Terry
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Date: 8/3/2021 9:36:00 AM
The Alpha Lines are really good and lead into the stanzas beautifully...Delice
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Date: 8/2/2021 11:27:00 PM
What imagery. A difficult form but you did well.
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Date: 8/2/2021 9:15:00 PM
Andrea, Pretty Rhyme.. 'Aurora begins collecting daybreak’s embers' That's quite nice imagined in this poem's sky. -Richard
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Date: 8/2/2021 3:11:00 PM
Enjoyed the voice of your poem traversing the day from sunrise to sunset. Beautiful images, Andrea.
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Date: 8/2/2021 3:10:00 PM
WoW! Andrea, I'm see all these amazing entries; maybe I should remove mines from the contest. Your Alpha lines are top-notch. It makes sense, and it has a nice rhythm and flow. Your verse is just breathtaking. Best wishes in the contest:-) Alexis
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