From Somewhere Deep Inside

I heard an angel the other night from deep inside my heart 
she sifted through my senses
                                 like liquid light 
It was an auditory worship 
                           of the most beautiful kind 
like the sounding of a cymbal, 
                           from somewhere deep inside 

Extracting me from worldly woes, 
                                 clairaudient delight 
totality of soul with tenderized confide 
                                  A tethered sound of wings 
                                fluttered through my mind, 
and just before I fell asleep, she harked from deep inside 

I hear your thoughts, I know your heart 
I am your counterpart 
Feel free to roam inside this fluid gate,  
until your netherworld abates.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Baker Avatar
October 8, 2022 at 4:57 PM
I enjoyed the depth of your thoughts, Vie. Thanks for sharing through your poetry, my friend. Bill
Rose  Avatar
October 8, 2022 at 6:45 PM
Thank you for reading my poetry, Bill, much appreciated
Gauthier Avatar
October 8, 2022 at 12:30 PM
Wow ~ particularly enjoyed your use of 'clairaudient' - the equialent of clairvoyant obviously. Well penned ~
Rose  Avatar
October 8, 2022 at 6:45 PM
Yes Line, Clairaudient is hearing sensory power, and clairvoyant is seeing, both are gifts bestowed by God, thank you for reading
Poet Avatar
October 8, 2022 at 7:22 AM
Rose Your poetry is brilliantly written, and it is able to portray the most lovely voice that you transmit from deep within. This is a skill that you possess. What a really moving writing piece you've done. Delightful both to read and to ponder.
Rose  Avatar
October 8, 2022 at 6:44 PM
Thank you Sotto, your comment is both heartwarming and appreciative,
Pandit Avatar
October 8, 2022 at 5:37 AM
Most beautiful voice you convey from deep inside!
Rose  Avatar
October 8, 2022 at 6:41 PM
Thanks for the visit Vijay
Buhagiar Avatar
October 8, 2022 at 3:52 AM
What an emotional write you've produced. Lovely to read and digest. Victor
Rose  Avatar
October 8, 2022 at 6:41 PM
Thank you for stopping by Victor,
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