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In old fuzzy slippers, she makes her children's lunches wondering and worrying if her husband has any hunches of where she goes or what she does while he works each day or that she spends her time thinking, "While the cat's away..." In worn bedroom slippers, she kisses each darling cheek a good mother is always loving. Role models should be meek She hurries her young ones to the bus and off to school aware of the ticking hands of the clock, but playing it cool Doting mother, affectionate wife, in fuzzy slippered shoes but there is another pair, the sexy ones she'll soon choose Tucked in the closet are ones she keeps hidden, anticipating how they make her feel, and the man who will be waiting In black stiletto heels, she becomes quite a capricious flirt Her husband has no clue. Oh, how much he would be hurt if he knew of those sexy shoes and tight-fitting slinky dresses the perfume she wears for him, the way she curls her tresses And when the deed is done, she slinks her way back home to bathe her secret sins away in a tub of bubbles and foam Into those well worn slippers, she will slide her cunning feet to welcome home her family, with a smile so sugary sweet August 1, 2017 Two Pair of Shoes for John Lawless

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Date: 8/9/2017 10:39:00 AM
Another worthy win Lin! Congrats on a poem that really causes one to pause on how they live their lives. Very interesting take on the prompt two shoes, it never brought anything to mind for me, glad you have another win! Looking forward to your entry in my current contest!
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Date: 8/9/2017 8:24:00 PM
Thanks so much for your terrific comments, John. I'll have to get busy on writing something for you.
Date: 8/8/2017 6:17:00 AM
Congrats!!! Lin...well deserved my friend...^WW^
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Date: 8/8/2017 12:06:00 PM
Thanks very much, WW.
Date: 8/8/2017 2:26:00 AM
Very often the one we love and stay with forget the woman part in us...alas! You describe it so wisely here. Thanks for sharing it and congrats!! Regs Sunita :)
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Date: 8/8/2017 12:05:00 PM
Thank you for your thoughts, Sunita.
Date: 8/7/2017 10:54:00 PM
what a sneeky peak into the shoes of her, loved this, congratulations on ur win. well done.
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Date: 8/8/2017 12:05:00 PM
Thank you, Lewis.
Date: 8/7/2017 9:39:00 PM
Congratulations, Lin..well done indeed !!
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Date: 8/8/2017 12:05:00 PM
Thank you very much, Larry.
Date: 8/7/2017 7:20:00 PM
Coming back with congrats on your top win!
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Date: 8/8/2017 12:04:00 PM
I appreciate your return trip and congratulations, Agnes!.
Date: 8/7/2017 7:14:00 PM
Congrats on a great write
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Date: 8/8/2017 12:04:00 PM
Thanks so much, Kim.
Date: 8/7/2017 6:28:00 PM
Hi Lin, what a naught girl she is in black stilettos. Our 'ladies' certainly are dangerous vamps lol! Very well done and congratulations on your top spot :)
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Date: 8/7/2017 6:30:00 PM
Thank you very much, Susan. Yeah, our 'ladies' like to step out. lol
Date: 8/7/2017 4:47:00 PM
woohooo way to go Lin many congrats on your top spot:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/7/2017 6:30:00 PM
lol Jan, your wave of the cheerleading pom poms make me smile. Hugs!!
Date: 8/7/2017 4:33:00 PM
Well Hooray! It is a top winner Lin! So happy to see it in First Place! Congratulations my friend. : )
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Date: 8/7/2017 6:29:00 PM
Thank you so very much for your gracious comments, Connie. You KNOW how much I loved your 'two shoes' poem.
Date: 8/7/2017 4:07:00 PM
Nicely done! Congratats!
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Date: 8/7/2017 6:28:00 PM
Thank you very much, Judy.
Date: 8/7/2017 2:08:00 PM
Congrats, Lin! Look at you, steppin' out all sexy Grandma!
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Date: 8/7/2017 3:03:00 PM
Grandma can be sexy and step out, but not on her husband...lol Thanks a lot, Dale.
Date: 8/7/2017 1:44:00 PM
That naughty vixen! Well done Lin! Congratulations on your well deserved win. -- Dean
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Date: 8/7/2017 3:02:00 PM
Oh yes she is. Does she happen to be the one you offered your Swiss chocolates? Thanks, Dean.
Date: 8/7/2017 1:34:00 PM
Loved this naughty-naughty take on the theme Lin. Well done
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Date: 8/7/2017 3:00:00 PM
I am humbly honored that you chose this write to grace your winner's list, John. Thanks ever so much.
Date: 8/7/2017 1:15:00 PM
This is an excellent take on this contest theme, Lyn! Indeed, two very contrasting shoes that have so much to narrate. I think one of these days her husband's shoes are gonna walk all over her! A winner, in my eyes! Regards // paul
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Date: 8/7/2017 2:59:00 PM
ha, yes, I agree. Thanks so much for the complimentary comments, Paul.
Date: 8/1/2017 3:43:00 PM
oh lin what a fabulous take on the contest theme - as we both know in our own lives there is to much deception around but folks can be so adept at covering their tracks. I hope this does really well in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/1/2017 3:49:00 PM
Leading two lives cannot go on forever. Sooner or later the hidden life will be uncovered. Thanks for reading and leaving your gentle remarks, Jan.
Date: 8/1/2017 10:28:00 AM
If she were fulfilled she wouldn't need a secret life. You write so well Lin. I loved your glimpse into what keeps this lady sane. This is a wonderful entry I hope is a top winner Lin. : )
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Date: 8/1/2017 3:47:00 PM
Thanks so very much for your thoughts and well wishes, Connie. I always look forward to seeing you.
Date: 8/1/2017 10:17:00 AM
Nice take on the contest prompt, Lin. Good luck.
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Date: 8/1/2017 10:19:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Agnes.
Date: 8/1/2017 9:52:00 AM
A unique take on the contest theme, Lin, should place high:) I feel sorry for the woman, what a double unhappy life!
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Date: 8/1/2017 10:13:00 AM
Knowing your gentle heart as I do from your comments and your poetry, Jo, you would be one of only a few who would take pity on this woman. You're such a sweet lady, and dear to me. Thank you for your thoughts and well wishes.
Date: 8/1/2017 9:18:00 AM
What an excellent piece Lin well thought out and well written. It highlights so well the selfishness of infidelity. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 8/1/2017 9:28:00 AM
You've pinpointed the mind set of this protagonist, Edward. She shows her "selfishness of infidelity." Thanks so much for reading and leaving your thoughts.
Date: 8/1/2017 8:26:00 AM
Lin, awesome entry for this contest, absolutely awesome :) xomo!
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Date: 8/4/2017 4:27:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Maureen.
Date: 8/1/2017 8:16:00 AM
I don't foresee a good outcome Lin... Excellent poetry
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Date: 8/1/2017 8:18:00 AM
There can never be a good end result when betrayal takes place. Thank you, Tim.
Date: 8/1/2017 8:09:00 AM
This write was a delight to read this morning! You have done an excellent job with your enjambments and line breaks within your poem, I really loved it! Such a wonderful piece, Great Work!!
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Lin Lane
Date: 8/1/2017 8:17:00 AM
Thank you for the many compliments, Russell. Each one is appreciated.

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