From Rags To Riches

A pauper begs at the town gate
and sets, each day, a date with fate.
He harbours dreams where riches flow
but morning finds him on skid row.

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Killing With an Epigram Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Margarita Lillico
    Placed 2nd
28th April, 2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Ray Choudhury Avatar
May 29, 2022 at 3:57 PM
Congratulations, Paul, on your win with such a sad, but powerful poem. Keep writing on such social issues to create awareness, Dear Poet - your pen is gifted!
Callus Avatar
July 29, 2022 at 3:02 AM
Thank you for stopping by with such encouraging words dear Mala. Let me excuse myself for such a late reply; lack of notifications often lets me down! ~ May I wish you a lovely weekend. // paul
Radice Avatar
May 9, 2022 at 1:30 AM
An excellent poem that's both sad and poignant Paul, about one of life's major social issues. It's all made worse - particularly here in the UK - when you read that "Hundreds of homeless people are being told by councils to sleep on the streets first if they want housing help under opaque government rules." I have no words. Cheers - Gary
Callus Avatar
May 13, 2022 at 12:40 PM
Thank you for the insightful comments, Gary. Unfortunately, I fear that the homeless problem is here to stay :( Regards // paul
Severo Avatar
May 7, 2022 at 5:56 PM
Hi Paul, great poem, it sure makes one appreciate what what we have in life. xoxoxo
Callus Avatar
May 13, 2022 at 12:27 PM
Hi Aurore! It's a pleasure to have you stopping by, and even more to see you posting again! By the way, presently listening to Taylor Momsen and The Pretty Reckless. Regards xox paul
Proxenos Avatar
May 5, 2022 at 1:22 PM
Hi Paul,I often wonder what triggers a person to land up in the streets begging. Some don't have the tenacity to play life's game, their dreams of riches and of fame, will only bring them shame, never worked an honest day, have only themselves to blame. Foresee a win my friend. Hugs, warm regards and blessings., Jennifer.
Callus Avatar
May 7, 2022 at 1:08 AM
Thank you for the lovely feedback in rhyme, Jenny...and for having faith in my entry. ~ Warm regards & Hugs, my friend. // paul
Y. Avatar
May 2, 2022 at 8:02 PM
Hi Paul, You composed a well-written poem on such a touchy subject. It breaks my heart to see folk down on their luck this. Best wishes in the contest. Have a good evening-Alexis
Callus Avatar
May 5, 2022 at 9:01 AM
Thank you for your feedback and best wishes, Alexis. I hope you are keeping well, my friend. ~ Warm regards // paul
Kendrick Avatar
May 2, 2022 at 6:14 AM
Reads like a good contender in the contest. Way to go. I enjoyed reading this contest entry. Your visit to my page was delightful. Sara
Callus Avatar
May 5, 2022 at 8:44 AM
Thank you, Sara. Always a pleasure to receive your visits. Regards // paul
George Avatar
May 1, 2022 at 10:38 PM
So sad is their fate ! Dreams are their only assets . Though never realized, let them at least enjoy the luxury of dreaming of affluent times... A touching and powerful write, Paul !
Callus Avatar
May 2, 2022 at 5:48 AM
Thank you for reading and liking, Valsa. Your feedback is appreciated. Regards // paul
Ball Avatar
May 1, 2022 at 6:35 PM
It's so sad to see these homeless people begging for pennies and scraps. We should try to help in any way we can. Great stuff. God Bless, JB
Callus Avatar
May 2, 2022 at 5:46 AM
I agree with you, Judy; helping those in need, even if in a small way, could make their life better. Thank you for your lovely visit and comments. Blessings // paul
Deo Avatar
May 1, 2022 at 9:56 AM
Well crafted, Paul. I'm also thankful he has zest to dream. Shalom shalom & thanX for your Comment
Callus Avatar
May 1, 2022 at 2:08 PM
Thank you, Anil. Dreams keep us going; without them life could easily lose its shine and become monotonous. ~ Best regards & peace // paul
Lawrence Avatar
April 29, 2022 at 9:34 AM
Paul my friend , So well expressed . I love He harbours dreams where riches flow . It is a sad reality for many … life on the streets . Hugs, Susan :)
Callus Avatar
April 30, 2022 at 10:29 AM
Thank you, Susan. One summer, when I was young, I slept on the streets for a week, when I was abroad on holiday and did not have enough money. I can't imagine myself doing that for a long time!! ~ Hugs // paul
Tor Avatar
April 29, 2022 at 12:10 AM
Sometimes Paul all you have is a dream and nothing monetary. Hope you are well. God bless...
Callus Avatar
April 30, 2022 at 10:02 AM
Life owes a lot to dreams, Michael. Money is important, but not to a point that one becomes a slave to it. ~ Best regards, my friend. // paul
Romios Avatar
April 28, 2022 at 1:14 PM
Great epigram, Paul here in California, stealing is allowed. Poor? Not here! The gov, ie, us, pay for food, schooling and housing, medical care. They choose to live in tents, even though they have housing money. Free cell phones also. The Skid Rows I know were in 1950. Nobody need to go hungry in the USA. They also have like a credit card for food. Worse, freeloaders create an illnesss to qualify for benefits. Stealing from our Gov is a hobby here. That is immoral. Pangie
Callus Avatar
April 30, 2022 at 5:12 AM
Thank you for stopping by, Pangie. I'm afraid that nowadays, freeloaders are to be found everywhere! Social benefits are blatantly abused. ~ Have a nice weekend, my friend. // paul
Sands Avatar
April 28, 2022 at 10:55 AM
Sad and well written Paul. I hope your day is going well :)
Callus Avatar
April 28, 2022 at 11:23 AM
Thank you, Heidi. I have been on a much needed break in to neighboring Sicily. Warm regards // paul
Cunningham Avatar
April 28, 2022 at 10:20 AM
Sad that many find themselves in that situation, often through no fault of their own. Good luck in the contest. Hope you're keeping well Paul. Tom
Callus Avatar
April 28, 2022 at 11:20 AM
I agree with you, Tom. We are not all born under a lucky star. Thank you for stopping by, my friend. Best regards // paul
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