Ralph Sergi Poet Free verse

From Noir To Blanche

From Noir to Blanche

The lovely daisies closed my eyes
I dreamt of angels in disguise
Who walked upon my mortal land
Dressed only in their black and gray
The somber clothing very bland

They gathered flowers as they passed
Then tossed them in the summer air
As they alit  bright colors beamed
The daisies turned my eyes to green
Their clothing white to end the dream

Photograph#1 Contest
Sponsored by Poet Destroyer A
March 16, 2016

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Andrea Dietrich April 21, 2016 at 9:12 PM What a COOL dream this would be to have. And I see you got a win. I agree it should win. BIG congrats, my friend

Dineen Williams Gault April 21, 2016 at 5:58 AM This was beautifully vivid, I could envision those daisies being tossed in the air, turning her eyes green. Splendid write, congratulations!

Nette Onclaud April 20, 2016 at 2:03 PM sweet congrats, sergi..i like the shift here!..huggs

Ralph Sergi April 20, 2016 at 7:31 AM Hi Mystic: Thank you for sharing my win.

Ralph Sergi April 20, 2016 at 7:20 AM Hi Joseph: Thank you for comment. Much appreciated.

Joseph May April 19, 2016 at 3:11 PM Very nicely penned Ralph...Congrats on your win

Ralph Sergi April 19, 2016 at 1:39 PM Thank you Richard.

Richard Lamoureux April 19, 2016 at 6:55 AM I see this is a winner, not surprising Ralph it is very good. Congratulations.

Cherl Dunn April 18, 2016 at 10:27 PM Dear Ralph Excellent piece, congrats on the win Ralph take care and keep these winners coming, I'll be here to read them all, cheri d.

Jan Allison April 18, 2016 at 12:27 PM Dropping back with my congrats Ralph:-) hugs Jan xx

Bl Devnath April 18, 2016 at 12:00 PM Congrats on your win my lovely friend. Loved always, bl

Poet Destroyer A April 18, 2016 at 1:56 AM Ralph, Congratulations on your awesome entry for my PICTURE contest. Thank you for keeping it under 10 lines... Stop by my latest blog "Photo Questions" and enjoy my take on the same picture of "Lilly Covering Her eyes." I wrote a little something myself. Enjoy if you like. Always ~LINDA~ Ralph Sergi April 19, 2016 at 1:41 PM Hi Linda:Thank you very much, I am honored to hear from a sponsor. I will be sure to check your blog.

Cherl Dunn April 17, 2016 at 3:52 PM Dear Ralph Nice piece excellent content, really a wonderful job my friend, and thanks for your awesome comments, cheri Ralph Sergi April 17, 2016 at 5:15 PM Hi Cherl: Thank you for your kind words. It's always god to hear from you.

Jan Allison April 16, 2016 at 3:59 PM It sounds like a beautiful dream Ralph:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx Ralph Sergi April 17, 2016 at 5:16 PM Hi Jan: THANK YOU FOR YOUR KIND WORDS.