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From Lands Away

sublime the whispered words
that gently kiss my ear
surreal incessant longing
that draws you ever near



AP: 3rd place 2022

Submitted on July 19, 2021 for A BRIAN STRAND JUL 20 contest sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - RANKED 1ST
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Brul Avatar
July 21, 2021 at 7:02 AM
So magical..I love this! One of the best short poems I’ve ever read. Congratulations…A fav!
Gauthier Avatar
July 21, 2021 at 8:21 AM
Thank you so much, JCB ~ most appreciated
Alex Avatar
July 21, 2021 at 5:50 AM
Short and sweet rhyme. Congratulations!
Gauthier Avatar
July 21, 2021 at 6:35 AM
thanks, Christuraj ~
Skelly Avatar
July 20, 2021 at 10:42 AM
Very nice indeed. Good luck in the contest....Delice
Gauthier Avatar
July 20, 2021 at 3:26 PM
Thank you very much, Delice ~
Wolf Avatar
July 19, 2021 at 5:52 PM
Just like the first word, this poem is simply sublime, Line. Wonderful! ~ Gershon
Gauthier Avatar
July 20, 2021 at 3:26 PM
Thank you so much, Gershon ~
Buhagiar Avatar
July 19, 2021 at 3:27 AM
An emotion that stirs the heart with love and romance. A lovely poem.
Gauthier Avatar
July 20, 2021 at 3:27 PM
Thank you for your lovely comment, Victor ~
Mcintosh Avatar
July 19, 2021 at 3:01 AM
Lovely and wise. God bless you my friend. Love, Gina
Gauthier Avatar
July 19, 2021 at 6:22 AM
Thanks for the lovely comment, Gina ~
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