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From Fireworks To Fizzle

From fireworks to fizzle, so went our love, now it's good morning, goodnight, without a hug. Existing in harmony, one day at a time, you have your space, and I have mine. The house is full, of nothing at all, but no one notices, all the bare walls. Another day ends, and to dreamland we go, to awaken the fireworks, that each misses so.

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Date: 3/12/2009 9:39:00 PM
Time for a counselor dear? "Hello Beautiful and Precious Christy Hardy!!!"~I hope that life has been treating "You" well dear lady!!? And better than this write might suggest? Yet, I find it extremely hard to believe; after knowing "Your Beauty" as long as I have~that 'anyone' would ever miss "This Wonderful Treasure" which they have in their lives!!!?~" My Love Always To You Christy, And All Your Loves, Forever, John!!!":)
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Date: 3/12/2009 6:42:00 PM
wow you had me from beginning to end. i see that this is the way that some women feel and you've addressed it quite nicely. not to mention beautifully. John H Loving III
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Date: 3/12/2009 10:38:00 AM
Ah, sad commentary on the waning of a partnership!! Excellent writing! Have I said Welcome to PoetrySoup yet, Christy ... smile ... I enjoy your writing very much and will have to read more soon!!
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Date: 3/12/2009 7:07:00 AM
As how a lot of couples spend thier lives now a days .Great write.I think i got my Mail turned on now, but im not sure.
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Date: 3/12/2009 6:13:00 AM
The rhyme itself is great while the subject, I am sorry to say is all too real for me. Very well written. Michael
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Date: 3/12/2009 3:13:00 AM
Yes this is all to familier, but nothing is waisted on a good man, expecially when he knows you love him, that is the most brilliant firework of all. Climb a rooftop, and yell til he hears you. Thanks for your commentary on my poem.-AA
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Date: 3/11/2009 7:15:00 PM
Sometimes love is taken for granted
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Date: 3/11/2009 3:15:00 PM
A very true take on relationships Christy, so wonderfully written, I could relate to this so very much, thank you...
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Date: 3/11/2009 3:07:00 PM
I felt an ache in hiding, towards the end of this great poem, thanks Christy! and thx for your comments...Jim
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Date: 3/11/2009 6:12:00 AM
Aww, somewhat sad, but a bit hopeful towards the end (I think). Relationships are complicated and after being together a long time, problems arise and the distance between two can often grow. Hope all is well. Life is mighty strange. Love & hugs, Shar xoxo
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Date: 3/10/2009 6:56:00 PM
Oh Christy such agony. Cool thing about long term relationships is that you fall in and out of love so maybe harmony isn't all that bad. Sweetly sad write
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Date: 3/10/2009 6:26:00 PM
hi Christy - what a beautiful open and honest poem you have penned here - Very beautiful hon - There is nothing on this earth more beautiful than the friendship of love - the friendship is what truly matters everything else is but icing on the cake - Hope all is well and that your son is doing good - YF4L, God Bless , MJ
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