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From Distant Shores (Elena)

Golden waves roll in from a distant shore, but would she offer me her neck? Lithe form like the undulating sands along the Nile shifting with each step, but would that step end at my door? Tall and picturesque, as if formed from the same stone that the Greeks carved their gods and goddesses, but will I be able to brush off the last chips from this living statue? From a town filled with catacombs and an illusion of mystery, and still I wonder, will it be something that I can explore and seek its wonders? With all that life throws, the foreign seems pristine, the untouchable draws you in, but is the intrigue worth the sacrifice, is that which falls on my plate what I deserve or just the distractions that I find at every turn?

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Date: 5/15/2009 11:35:00 AM
Mark, I like what you have done here and it is sad that lesser poems than this get praised to the highest. The fact took care to lay out this poem for visual impact and that you have carefully measured the stanzas and lines to make a beautiful poem, is much to your credit. I like the language of this and it has a more modernist feel to it than 'romanticist'. but it could be argued that this is modernist romanticism. Whatever, this is a great achievement.
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Date: 5/14/2009 4:03:00 PM
I speak to myself too sometimes, especially when I'm stressed or just need someone who will listen with an objective point of view.-A
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