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From Burlap To Satin

There she was back at her after-school job Stashing away all she could for college Always in her scruffy jeans and soiled blouse Peeling potatoes from a burlap bag Every weekend missing out on outings Her friends often came to the restaurant From the back she heard them carrying on She peeled potatoes from a burlap bag Asked to the prom by a handsome senior Decked in high heels and a dress of satin Looking fab with her future bright ahead Accrued day dreams of future and college Forgotten, t’was furthest thing from her mind Not one thought to potatoes from burlap AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Submitted on March 10, 2018 for contest BURLAP AND SATIN sponsored by ANTHONY SLAUSEN

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/11/2018 4:04:00 AM

Good luck; a difficult combination of words, but you certainly pulled it off, Line. I could so relate to this, having worked 28 hours a week my last two years of high school to pay for my college.

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/11/2018 10:46:00 AM

Thanks for your visit and comment, Caren. We can somewhat tell you have earned your rich experience of life.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/10/2018 5:08:00 PM

Hope it paid off for her in the end. Goid luck . Tom

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/10/2018 5:27:00 PM

Thanks for your visit, Tom. Much appreciated.