From Birth To Hearse

From Birth to Hearse


‘Tis said that we are sinners - all
before we ever rise - we fall.
Is there no way to beat the curse
that follows us - from birth - to hearse?

For we are bathed in living’s dreams
darkened halls with  violet themes,
the orange maw of changelings hue
transfiguring through greens – to blue,

windblown brushstroke-fashioned clouds
move about in eerie shrouds
opalescent shifting reds
glistening through tartan threads.

Witness, as in the timeless nest,
the crimson golds of sunrise – set,
cling to horizon’s blue-edged lie
that colors – separate - the sky.

Distorted by the muted browns
the shifting dunes of opal gowns
flowing in chimeral white
across the darkened stage - of sight.

‘Tis said we are and will be dust
colors changed by living’s touch,
beauty that reversed the curse
that follows us - from birth – to hearse.



8/1/2014
For Charlotte Puddifoot
Vibrant Verse 2 poetry contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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A   Avatar
August 24, 2014 at 11:41 AM
John:) Thank you for the nice reply on my comment <3 LINDA
Trichet Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 11:41 PM
Loved it John, congrats on such a vibrant verse
Lawless Avatar
August 9, 2014 at 7:41 AM
Thanks Mark.
Gibson Avatar
August 7, 2014 at 8:08 PM
Back again to say congratulations, John.
Lawless Avatar
August 9, 2014 at 7:40 AM
Thanks again Faye
A   Avatar
August 7, 2014 at 6:40 AM
Amazing poem.... Linda
Lawless Avatar
August 7, 2014 at 7:27 AM
Thanks, PD
Puddifoot Avatar
August 7, 2014 at 6:15 AM
I rarely place poems that contain archaisms such as 'tis', but I simply had to place this one for its vibrant images and beautiful use of colour! I liked the profound theme, too...not even the 'tis' could detract from the beauty of this poem (though I'd prefer 'it is'!) I like your work very much - congrats on your win in my contest! :)
Lawless Avatar
August 7, 2014 at 7:20 AM
Charlotte, I thought "archaisms" were covered under the "poetic license" clause.
Dietrich Avatar
August 2, 2014 at 9:42 PM
my goodness, this one just got better and better as I read it. It has many cool images and great colorful words. You took an idea and brushed that paint all over it. Hope to see you on the winners' list.
Lawless Avatar
August 7, 2014 at 7:27 AM
Andrea, made the list. Thank you for you support and kind words.
Allison Avatar
August 2, 2014 at 11:49 AM
Incredible imagery in this poignant write and i love the clever rhyming. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Jan xxx
Lawless Avatar
August 7, 2014 at 7:22 AM
Thank you Jan.
Gibson Avatar
August 2, 2014 at 10:17 AM
John, glad I can be the first to comment on this wonderful poem. I know many comments will follow mine. So beautifully you take us on life's journey; I feel the yearning of our souls eloquently expressed.
Lawless Avatar
August 7, 2014 at 7:21 AM
Thanks Faye, for your encouragement and kind words.
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