Sandra Hudson Poet Diamante

From Babe To Babe

.                                               Babe
                                          Young, innocent
                                  Playing, skipping, running
                Clay, diamond in the rough, gemstone, birthstone
                                  Dating, wedding, birthing, 
                                          Mature, legal
                                                 Babe


                         Winner of sixth place in Nathans Contest

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July 16, 2009 at 5:27 PM Sorry I missed this earlier. Congratulations on your win in Nathan's contest. You used this challenging form in a creative way. Regarding your question about SOS, it's the latest Soup challenge--kind of a tagging type poem. Keep on writing! Karen

Michael Jordan July 15, 2009 at 4:27 PM Sandra - Congratulations on placing in Nathan’s contest – I apologize for it taking so long for me to say it, God Bless, MJ

Constance La France June 29, 2009 at 12:25 PM congratulations on your win.

Carrie Richards June 28, 2009 at 6:35 AM Well done, Sandra!! Love the form ... love the use of the subject...Congratulations on this winning poem!!

Brian Strand June 28, 2009 at 12:49 AM Congrats on your success in Nathan's contest Sandra.Rgds Brian

Raul Moreno June 27, 2009 at 11:17 PM Sandra, congrats with your placement in Nathan's contest...Raul

Nathan Leccese June 27, 2009 at 8:42 PM Congratulations on 6th place in my contest! Nate

James Fraser June 14, 2009 at 5:32 AM A most wonderful gem of a poem>>James

Sajdah Al-Riyami June 8, 2009 at 6:53 AM Love how you embarked the Key word into the poem:"Diamond in the rouff".Osamly Rockin'

Cesar Cantu June 2, 2009 at 6:22 PM Hey, tht was quick and accurate, clever, awsome =) Indeed we all change, at least our crust; thanks for sharing and for the experience =) how many names have we all had during our lifetime?

John Loving Iii June 2, 2009 at 4:46 PM and it happens so quickly. john h loving iii

Sharon Winter June 2, 2009 at 6:29 AM Brilliant in form and content! Creative idea from a most talented poetess. Good luck! And warmest thanks my friend. Love, Shar

Christopher Higgins June 1, 2009 at 6:12 PM I love the journey of this piece..time comes in a flash and sweep away memories in a hurry leaving you to think what happened..good write.

Nathan Leccese June 1, 2009 at 6:10 PM Thanks for supporting my contest. Nate

Jessica K June 1, 2009 at 5:46 PM Beautiful piece Sandra, I really enjoyed reading it...keep it up -Jessica