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From Babe To Babe

.                                               Babe
                                          Young, innocent
                                  Playing, skipping, running
                Clay, diamond in the rough, gemstone, birthstone
                                  Dating, wedding, birthing, 
                                          Mature, legal
                                                 Babe


                         Winner of sixth place in Nathans Contest

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Date: 7/16/2009 5:27:00 PM

Sorry I missed this earlier. Congratulations on your win in Nathan's contest. You used this challenging form in a creative way. Regarding your question about SOS, it's the latest Soup challenge--kind of a tagging type poem. Keep on writing! Karen

Michael Jordan

Date: 7/15/2009 4:27:00 PM

Sandra - Congratulations on placing in Nathan’s contest – I apologize for it taking so long for me to say it, God Bless, MJ

Constance La France

Date: 6/29/2009 12:25:00 PM

congratulations on your win.

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/28/2009 6:35:00 AM

Well done, Sandra!! Love the form ... love the use of the subject...Congratulations on this winning poem!!

Brian Strand

Date: 6/28/2009 12:49:00 AM

Congrats on your success in Nathan's contest Sandra.Rgds Brian

Raul Moreno

Date: 6/27/2009 11:17:00 PM

Sandra, congrats with your placement in Nathan's contest...Raul

Nathan Leccese

Date: 6/27/2009 8:42:00 PM

Congratulations on 6th place in my contest! Nate

James Fraser

Date: 6/14/2009 5:32:00 AM

A most wonderful gem of a poem>>James

Sajdah Al-Riyami

Date: 6/8/2009 6:53:00 AM

Love how you embarked the Key word into the poem:"Diamond in the rouff".Osamly Rockin'

Cesar Cantu

Date: 6/2/2009 6:22:00 PM

Hey, tht was quick and accurate, clever, awsome =) Indeed we all change, at least our crust; thanks for sharing and for the experience =) how many names have we all had during our lifetime?

John Loving Iii

Date: 6/2/2009 4:46:00 PM

and it happens so quickly. john h loving iii

Sharon Winter

Date: 6/2/2009 6:29:00 AM

Brilliant in form and content! Creative idea from a most talented poetess. Good luck! And warmest thanks my friend. Love, Shar

Christopher Higgins

Date: 6/1/2009 6:12:00 PM

I love the journey of this piece..time comes in a flash and sweep away memories in a hurry leaving you to think what happened..good write.

Nathan Leccese

Date: 6/1/2009 6:10:00 PM

Thanks for supporting my contest. Nate