From a Father, From a Son

Patient clasps of hands, a master’s apprentice fumbling
slimy worms in swirling streams,
brook trout laughing at my folly.
Atop of your back, sun soothing heavy eyelids stuffed like cottonballs,
while the slow steady cadence of slumbering trails burst colors
of orange, yellow, red explosions of fall.
You taught me how to wrestle with foxtails, exhaling wishes from dandelions:
"pay careful attention to the paintbrush"
Nature’s way of flaming the death of summer’s call.
My heart racing as we watched mother doe,
gentle, nibble the tear-soaked tips of grass.
Your inner compass never forgetting home,
dizziness as we gazed heavenward at the ancient crowns
reaching the pearlescent skies.
You taught me mossy beards, north slope, fir,
shelter from the cold, the best branch for a fire, instructions for a son.
Silence forging sacred breath, your hands crackled like autumn leaves,
draped in mine, melting the embedded calluses of fragility,
eyes turned grey calling the paint brush of fall.
Still just a child secured upon your back, 
peanut butter fingerprints pressing in time,
"daddy, what if I cannot find home"
looking down with saucer-wide eyes,
 I can still hear your voice:
"be still, wait, I will always find you."
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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May 17, 2009 at 1:59 PM
Jason, congrats on being featured this week!
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May 16, 2009 at 2:02 PM
Jason, nice work and congrats on being featured this week...Raul
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May 12, 2009 at 5:08 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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May 12, 2009 at 2:49 AM
well done on your featured poem great work, God bless from diane
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May 11, 2009 at 5:37 PM
Nice use of imagery to convey your thoughts. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Enjoy your honor. Keep on writing! Karen
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May 11, 2009 at 10:36 AM
Congrats on your excellent featured write of the week! Love, Shar
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May 11, 2009 at 8:09 AM
Congratulations Jason on being featured this week. Still like this one. wonderful write. Vince
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May 10, 2009 at 10:36 PM
Hello my friend, congrats on this featured write. Ernilando
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March 15, 2009 at 4:10 AM
You remembrances makes for great poetry. I wasn't much of a fisherman but I went when my kids were small just for the time spent, God Bless. Vince
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December 12, 2008 at 2:33 PM
You don't overuse adjectives which I like. Your imagery is so vivid and your language is unique and captivating. '...slimy worms in swirling streams,' (alliteration), '...stuffed like cottonballs,' '...embedded calluses of fragility,' ...superb! Your last four lines are magnificent... I am in awe! Best wishes, Keith
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November 8, 2008 at 5:22 PM
What a good message about the importance of family to a child's life. Thanks for sharing this story with us. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent here. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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