From a Distance

From a distance, I see you shining like a star.
The wind blows your hair and silken gown.
Suddenly,the darkness covered the ground.
I couldn't see your face, your image has gone.

I walk a mile,just to send you back in my arms.
I need to see your face, I need an air to breathe.
I wanna feel your embrace, I wanna burn high.
I need you here beside me...I need you alive.

I remember when I spread an ash in the wind.
I told myself, I'm setting you free.
Though letting you go kills my soul.
I let the wind blow and see you go.

But this boundary seems so hard to break.
No matter how far I move my feet,
I couldn't turn back your breathe.
Thinking of life without you makes me weak.

Today, I see the sun shines above me,
Waiting for the time you hold my hands.
To walk with you another miles.
To share love with you in paradise.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 5/5/2014 10:01:00 AM
Hello Aiyah, This write my friend was very heart full. Very well said with truth and emotion. And if I could give you ten trophy's and ten gold stars I would:~) This was very beautiful and it touched my heart. Thank you so much for sharing this write with us here. Peace, Deborah
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Date: 4/11/2014 2:55:00 PM
WOW!! I GOT VERY EMOTIONAL READING THAT!!. AWESOMELY WRITTEN!! GOOD STUFF!! I COULD FEEL YOUR EMOTIONS!!
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 4/11/2014 3:50:00 PM
OH Karen, Thank you for this wonderful comment!!! :O))
Date: 4/7/2014 11:27:00 PM
Letting go but living with the knowledge you will be with them again. Wonderful message and wonderful imagery in this poem.
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 4/11/2014 3:50:00 PM
tHank you, Andie!!! :O)
Date: 4/5/2014 2:08:00 AM
A walk along a heart's desire, a romantic supplication. This is honest need. Pretty write. J.A.B.
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 4/11/2014 3:50:00 PM
Thank you , JAB!! :O)
Date: 4/3/2014 2:41:00 PM
They will always be there with you in your memories..Big Hug Tim
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 4/4/2014 8:31:00 AM
Hi Tim... don't worry... it's just one of the fruit of my dramatic imagination.. lol... :')) I'm fine.. Thanks for the comment!! ^__^
Date: 4/3/2014 1:53:00 PM
Very heartfelt "song" dear AiyaH. Sometimes we find it hard to admit that somebody has gone for good, but then reality sinks in with all the sadness that comes with it. // Faith can smooth the grief; the belief of an afterlife and what it brings with it. :) // paul
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 4/4/2014 8:30:00 AM
Thank you ,Paul... yes, a song from a broken heart.. :"0) THanks for a great comment... you are one of the " good guys" here in PS.. keep it up, man!!! ..:)))
Date: 4/3/2014 1:49:00 PM
Love' has no distance. Lovely Poem, Aiyah, DX
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 4/4/2014 8:29:00 AM
Yup! ..love has no distance, indeed... Thanks for the coometn, Dom-X.. (nice name huh!! ) #__#
Date: 4/3/2014 1:10:00 PM
- A sad subject, my dear friend AiyaH ... but a part of life ... I believe we meet again .... but where and how .... in paradise....nobody knows - A beautiful poem skilful written, as always! ! - Hope all is well with you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/3/2014 1:19:00 PM
Thank you - hugs back to you my friend :))
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 4/3/2014 1:13:00 PM
I'm all fine ,Anne Lise... Thanks a lot! ...yeah..we wouldn't know until we get there... but I believe, WE WILL MEET AGAIN!! ..^__^ here's a hugs for you dear friend o' mine!!! :O))
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