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Frog Needs a New Pad

“Ribbit” croaks the frog
his lily pad is sinking…
     time to hop along

larger lily pad
makes a summer home for frogs…
     until the storms come




*Entry for Sidney Lee Ann’s “Lily-Pads and Frogs” contest
By Carolyn Devonshire
Theme: both lily pads and frogs

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/22/2012 8:47:00 PM

loved it before. love it now. Congrats!

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 5/21/2012 7:28:00 AM

I like it LNC! congrats again. BG

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/21/2012 7:17:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Sidney~LeeAnn's "Lilly-pads and Frogs" contest Carolyn. Love, Carol

David Williams

Date: 5/20/2012 3:53:00 AM

Carolyn congrats on your win..David

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 4/29/2012 1:45:00 AM

Smiles as I read this, especially since I also think of it as a new pad (as in apartment) crazy me-- and it sure seems more fun to have more frogs in one pad-- a concert if you will ;D Enjoyed this one Carolyn-- how did your trip go? I hope you caught some big fish!! And I hope all is well with you! Hugs to you ;D

Gwendolen Song

Date: 4/29/2012 1:19:00 AM

Hi Carolyn...Gee whiz. I had no idea what was going on with your health...it sounded like neuropathy of some sort, but autonomic in nature?...Gads! I will be keeping you in my routine prayers...only positive thoughts and focusing on living....Yep, it looks as tho this frog needs a new home!...hee hee...it is adorable! These haiku contests have been entertaining lately-to say the least...Love and prayers, Gwendolen

Erich Goller

Date: 4/28/2012 4:30:00 PM

that's a lovely story poem, nice in Haiku form. I enjoyed reading it.God bless you. Hugs!Erich

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 4/28/2012 4:26:00 PM

Poor dispossessed little froggie! Perfect HAIKU meter and flow... Well done, Carolyn! Love, Keith

Kash Poet

Date: 4/28/2012 7:11:00 AM

Very nice lily pad and frog haiku.Best wishes carolyn.

Daver Austin

Date: 4/26/2012 11:21:00 AM

He must have been the Celebrated Jumping Frog of Caliveras County. Love these two cuties. Love, daver

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/26/2012 5:42:00 AM

Reads like a winner to me..I can see the scene..Maybe that frog is like me been hitting the Little Debbie snacks too much..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for stopping by my work "Beaver's Castor Gland" I added some information in the "About This Poem" section if you want to check it out..Sara

Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 4/26/2012 1:37:00 PM