Frivolous Chase

All eye admiration flood upon your presence
Beyond words, this mind bleeds,
Crushed by your metaphysical yet practical brilliance
Deafened by the hilarity of your quirks
Envying those that may embellish in your jests
Frozen in tears where the past brings smiles
Groveling beside the untouched potential 
How is it you excel among such fetid company?
Initiating your moon-shines like the sun is your god
Jumping jacks pounding these ever depressing soles 
Kittling the fingertips mindfully so 
Lackadaisically glancing upon our stranger-friend relationship
Mustering the audacity to surmount your eccentricities  
No one could ever quite notice before
Opulent in knowing you have captured so many 
Pained inside to the very last penny
Quenched from courage, I remain caged in your glory
Rabid to agitate your unacquainted waters  
Suckling upon the overflow—
The leftovers that offer richness I will never know
Understanding you wholeheartedly—I quiver
Violated by the comfort tease of your words
Wondering how love can surface upon unsteady oceans
X chromosome searching for a sharp fool within a current of chaos
Y chromosome spinning, slightly hidden with a small, sparkly smile
Zealous in the frivolous chase—I was latched from the start

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 5/10/2014 12:38:00 PM
Hi Laura, This shot to the top of WOW. Exceptional. Thank you for sharing this write with us. Peace, Deborah
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Date: 4/25/2014 2:05:00 AM
this is awesome - may be tempted to try ABC myself one day! Hugs Jan x
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Date: 4/22/2014 11:05:00 PM
wowowow. I know how hard it is to do ABC poetry. What a good job. I love what you did with X and Y!!
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Date: 4/5/2014 9:19:00 PM
<3 Wow...I felt it.
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Date: 4/2/2014 7:44:00 PM
WTF! How did I not see this sooner? "L" is something I used to know all too well. This was utterly incredible. "H" is a very vital line. How did they indeed! Striking the hearts of many with such ease...this is what you do so well.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 4/2/2014 7:52:00 PM
Thanks a mill Drake... : ) ~Laura
Date: 3/19/2014 9:01:00 PM
Love how you close this fine composition of spectrum wide admiration Laura. "Understanding you wholeheartedly I quiver...deafened by the hilarity of your quirks" I love it all. A FAV.
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Date: 3/19/2014 8:24:00 PM
One of the best ABC poems I have read Laura. I loved your creativity and the unique way you used X and Y. Blessings
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